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I looked for a source for this but I could find no definitive link
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mNew page: I made a start at rewording some of this article. The rest also needs to be rewritten. As it stands it would appear that the article is merely copied (in the most part) word for word from ...
Reworded first paragraph...the whole article consists of copy and paste's from external websites at the moment.
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made this sound less like a rant and more like an article
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replaced silly image
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Made a start at some de-essay-ifying: more to come
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rmvd unsourced, biased falsehood
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