Writing Homework Two Student Three

Part A: Correct [the] errors in the following:

God given rights belong to all of us, other than us, whom else would he give them to?

Need hyphen: "God-given". Also, "to whom else ..." Minus 1.

“I [am not] missing that game again”, I told him. After all, their friend was at the game and there was no way I was going to miss it.

OK.

When a stranger came and sought directions, I told him to not to bother my friend and me.

Good.

Neither the Patriots nor the Giants are the best team in the NFL this year. The Packers, admittedly were the finest players. Just joking-nobody around here doubts that the Giants are the greatest team ever!

Good.

All the mistakes in this will be caught by me this time. Do you think this work is something to be embarrassed about?

Good again.

James is most proud of the homework that had the fewest errors, of course! The final sentence, and the one before it; they were perfect.

A colon rather than a semicolon near the end. Minus 1.

58/60. Good work.--Andy Schlafly 09:50, 16 February 2012 (EST)

Handed essay in at class

OK.

AranM