Talk:Operation Cast Lead

Could someone please help clean up this article. The grammar is all over the place, there are some rather dubious phrases used, to the point where it looks like parody, and the referencing is done in rather a strange manner. Until I added it just now it didn't even state what 'Cast Lead' was until a few paragraphs down. On that point I would suggest that this page be moved to the title 'Operation Cast Lead'. If it isn't in fact parody then it would seem that the main contributor to this article has a significantly one-sided view of events as is reflected by the article as it stands. RobertWDP 12:18, 5 April 2009 (EDT)