Thanks! Just a few thoughts:
Interesting article--thanks! Just a few thoughts for improvement: Might you want to bullet-point each entry? If so, just place an asterisk (*) at the beginning of each line before each item. Also, citations would be a good idea to prove that what you say is true, and give credit to others if you got the info from them Again, nice job! --David B (talk) 16:24, 5 March 2016 (EST)
- In reading through this, it sounds more like an Essay. If you want, you can probably leave this as it is, but if you want to protect it from the edits of others, you could ask an admin like Conservative or Jpatt to change the tile of this to "Essay:Declaration of Independence from Liberalism" This would mark it as a personal work from you, that you would like people to avoid editing. Have a great day! --David B (talk) 16:35, 5 March 2016 (EST)
You're right. I'd like to give this essay status because it's really more of an original work and not something to be edited. I'll add the citations shortly. All of my claims, believe it or not, are well supported. Thanks for the support. I'm new here and it already seems like a vibrant community.
- Alright, sorry for making edits then. I won't simply "undo" since that would wipe out what you've done. but if you'd like, I'll go back and manually undo my tweaks. I'm sure that what you've said is true--I'm just mentioning citations because others might not be. I can't move this page to another, but I'd be happy to ask someone to do so. If you want me to undo my changes, though, it would be easier to do this before the page is moved.