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::I listened to the CNN interview and Hitchens thought his heavy drinking and chain-smoking was the cause of his esophageal cancer. I clarified the article and said it was likely the cause of his death which is a reasonable approach. I also put down a third risk factor which involved another aspect of Hitchen's unhealthy lifestyle. [[User:Conservative|Conservative]] 14:18, 7 June 2012 (EDT)
 
::I listened to the CNN interview and Hitchens thought his heavy drinking and chain-smoking was the cause of his esophageal cancer. I clarified the article and said it was likely the cause of his death which is a reasonable approach. I also put down a third risk factor which involved another aspect of Hitchen's unhealthy lifestyle. [[User:Conservative|Conservative]] 14:18, 7 June 2012 (EDT)
 
:::It's these three paragraphs to which I object. They have no place in a biographical article. As it is, this article devotes more space to speculating as to the cause of his death than documenting his life. I'd delete them myself, but they seem to have been deleted and reinstated several times before, and I don't want to start an edit war. --[[User:Esseph|Esseph]] 16:10, 7 June 2012 (EDT)
 
:::It's these three paragraphs to which I object. They have no place in a biographical article. As it is, this article devotes more space to speculating as to the cause of his death than documenting his life. I'd delete them myself, but they seem to have been deleted and reinstated several times before, and I don't want to start an edit war. --[[User:Esseph|Esseph]] 16:10, 7 June 2012 (EDT)
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::: Talk to those who have reinstalled the material. --[[User:Joaquín Martínez|Joaquín Martínez]] 21:20, 7 June 2012 (EDT)

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