Talk:Longbow
This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Colest (talk | contribs) at 14:25, May 11, 2007. It may differ significantly from current revision.
Good removal of the stub... good additions too. Learn together 16:48, 10 May 2007 (EDT)
- The first paragraph just doesn't seem to flow well when I read it. Perhaps you can tweak it better than I can? :) --Colest 16:51, 10 May 2007 (EDT)
- I've tried... see what you think... Good working with you. ;-) Learn together 17:08, 10 May 2007 (EDT)
- Looks great! --Colest 17:11, 10 May 2007 (EDT)
- I've tried... see what you think... Good working with you. ;-) Learn together 17:08, 10 May 2007 (EDT)
I'm going to remove the need for expansion tag and category, as this article now seems to fit what this encyclopedia is looking for - a concise article. Feel free to revert if you disagree. --Colest 10:25, 11 May 2007 (EDT)