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I fixed a translation error on the Gates of Hell quote--[[User:Elamdri|Elamdri]] 09:28, 31 May 2007 (EDT) | I fixed a translation error on the Gates of Hell quote--[[User:Elamdri|Elamdri]] 09:28, 31 May 2007 (EDT) | ||
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| + | Is the phrase "It is very frightening" really appropriate for inclusion, especially in the first paragraph of this article? While I appreciate what you're saying, I think perhaps phrasing it as "It was written to be a terrifying view of Hell" or something similar would be a better way of phrasing it. I would have made the change but thought I'd better check with someone first. RightSaysNick Nick Bowler 17:48 (GMT) 21 Nov 2009 | ||
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I fixed a translation error on the Gates of Hell quote--Elamdri 09:28, 31 May 2007 (EDT)
Is the phrase "It is very frightening" really appropriate for inclusion, especially in the first paragraph of this article? While I appreciate what you're saying, I think perhaps phrasing it as "It was written to be a terrifying view of Hell" or something similar would be a better way of phrasing it. I would have made the change but thought I'd better check with someone first. RightSaysNick Nick Bowler 17:48 (GMT) 21 Nov 2009