Difference between revisions of "Talk:Destiny Church"
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| − | There's some biased information here I've removed - | + | There's some biased information here I've removed - many would disagree the church is well-led. Even many New Zealand evangelicals see Destiny Church as a 'cult', in part as a result of a perceived emphasis on Prosperity Gospel.[[User:UlyssesNZ|UlyssesNZ]] 20:17, 16 August 2008 (EDT) |
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reverted your changes because
It believes in the word of Lord as in the Bible, and although in a country surrounded by blasphemy, social decay and immorality, (New Zealand) serves to protect its standing as a Christian country.
Note that the subject "it" is in the sentence once and to repeat it is bad grammar.
years v year's
I'm not exactly sure why but I think years is better here. --
There's some biased information here I've removed - many would disagree the church is well-led. Even many New Zealand evangelicals see Destiny Church as a 'cult', in part as a result of a perceived emphasis on Prosperity Gospel.UlyssesNZ 20:17, 16 August 2008 (EDT)