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::Can you reword it so the reader would ''like'' to eat pork? --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] 12:32, 24 May 2007 (EDT) | ::Can you reword it so the reader would ''like'' to eat pork? --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] 12:32, 24 May 2007 (EDT) | ||
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| + | Actually, I overused the word carcass, thanks for pointing it out as it seemed a bit repetative. Used some friendlier similes, let me know if any more of it needs rewording [[User:Fingermouse|Fingermouse]] 12:33, 24 May 2007 (EDT) | ||
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The article gives the impression of being written to excite disgust or revulsion. Words like 'carcass', etc. Is someone trying to send a subtle message here? --Ed Poor 12:26, 24 May 2007 (EDT)
- I've been accused of many things but subtle I ain't! ; P I can remove them or rephrase them if you prefer but it's pretty standard terminology when talking about cuts of meat. Fingermouse 12:31, 24 May 2007 (EDT)
- Can you reword it so the reader would like to eat pork? --Ed Poor 12:32, 24 May 2007 (EDT)
Actually, I overused the word carcass, thanks for pointing it out as it seemed a bit repetative. Used some friendlier similes, let me know if any more of it needs rewording Fingermouse 12:33, 24 May 2007 (EDT)