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:The first paragraph just doesn't seem to flow well when I read it. Perhaps you can tweak it better than I can? :) --[[User:Colest|Colest]] 16:51, 10 May 2007 (EDT) | :The first paragraph just doesn't seem to flow well when I read it. Perhaps you can tweak it better than I can? :) --[[User:Colest|Colest]] 16:51, 10 May 2007 (EDT) | ||
::I've tried... see what you think... Good working with you. ;-) [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 17:08, 10 May 2007 (EDT) | ::I've tried... see what you think... Good working with you. ;-) [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 17:08, 10 May 2007 (EDT) | ||
| + | ::: Looks great! --[[User:Colest|Colest]] 17:11, 10 May 2007 (EDT) | ||
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Good removal of the stub... good additions too. Learn together 16:48, 10 May 2007 (EDT)
- The first paragraph just doesn't seem to flow well when I read it. Perhaps you can tweak it better than I can? :) --Colest 16:51, 10 May 2007 (EDT)
- I've tried... see what you think... Good working with you. ;-) Learn together 17:08, 10 May 2007 (EDT)
- Looks great! --Colest 17:11, 10 May 2007 (EDT)
- I've tried... see what you think... Good working with you. ;-) Learn together 17:08, 10 May 2007 (EDT)