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:Thanks for your edits on [[Battle of Long Tan]]! I recommend using more citations in the article, but other than that your work on that article seems great! --[[User:1990'sguy|1990'sguy]] ([[User talk:1990'sguy|talk]]) 17:57, 20 October 2016 (EDT)
 
:Thanks for your edits on [[Battle of Long Tan]]! I recommend using more citations in the article, but other than that your work on that article seems great! --[[User:1990'sguy|1990'sguy]] ([[User talk:1990'sguy|talk]]) 17:57, 20 October 2016 (EDT)
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::From what I see, you have covered all the facts in your citations. However, you may want to clinch it with the Australian War Museum's own version of the battle at: https://www.awm.gov.au/wartime/55/long-tan/ . As you know, the better parts of the Australian press was all over it during its 50th anniversary in August. A sentence on Vietnam's refusal (and last minute back down) to allow Oz veterans and their families to pay their respects may bring the story up to date - it's up to you.
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::[[User:AlanE|AlanE]] ([[User talk:AlanE|talk]]) 00:52, 23 October 2016 (EDT)

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Thanks for your edits on Battle of Long Tan! I recommend using more citations in the article, but other than that your work on that article seems great! --1990'sguy (talk) 17:57, 20 October 2016 (EDT)
From what I see, you have covered all the facts in your citations. However, you may want to clinch it with the Australian War Museum's own version of the battle at: https://www.awm.gov.au/wartime/55/long-tan/ . As you know, the better parts of the Australian press was all over it during its 50th anniversary in August. A sentence on Vietnam's refusal (and last minute back down) to allow Oz veterans and their families to pay their respects may bring the story up to date - it's up to you.
AlanE (talk) 00:52, 23 October 2016 (EDT)