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==General Improvement==
==General Improvement==
Two things strike me right off--This page reads more like an advertisement or TV Guide review than an encyclopedia, and the page name "24" might not be the best. That title is not specific--something like "24 (television)" or "24 (show)" would seem better to me. Additionally, if what [[User:MrGrieves|MrGrieves]] said is true, other revisions might be in order as well. --[[User:DavidB4|David B]] ([[User talk:DavidB4|talk]]) 01:29, 22 March 2016 (EDT)
Two things strike me right off--This page reads more like an advertisement or TV Guide review than an encyclopedia, and the page name "24" might not be the best. That title is not specific--something like "24 (television)" or "24 (show)" would seem better to me. Additionally, if what [[User:MrGrieves|MrGrieves]] said is true, other revisions might be in order as well. --[[User:DavidB4|David B]] ([[User talk:DavidB4|talk]]) 01:29, 22 March 2016 (EDT)
I watched the first three episodes of this series. They do try to be creative and keep it exciting, but here's some of what I've seen so far:<br />
# Season 1 starts with America's first African-American Presidential candidate ([[Obama]]?) being the target of "extremists" who want him dead for his skin color alone. A rather far-fetched idea in this politically correct environment.
# In the first two episodes, I counted three different commissions of adultery between three different couples. I might have missed some, too...hard to say. It hints at at least one more.
# In episode 3, two [[lesbian]]s are shown acting inappropriately.<br />
In All, doesn't this sound like a great series for CP to be advertising? --[[User:DavidB4|David B]] ([[User talk:DavidB4|talk]]) 12:34, 24 March 2016 (EDT)