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NathanG at 18:55, April 12, 2008

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 <br>Neither the Patriots nor the Giants are the best team in the NFL this year.  The Packers, lets admit was the finest players.  Just joking ..... no one around hear doubt that the Giants are the most greatest ever!
-<br>All the mistakes in this will be cought by I this time.  Does you think this work are something to be proud of
+<br>All the mistakes in this will be cought by I this time.  Does you think this work are something to be embarassed about
 <br>Which is James is most proud of.  The homework that had the fewest error, of course!  This final sentence, the last phrase, and look at the one before it; they was most perfect.

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 <br>6.  Is the world becoming a better place, or a worse one?  Explain your view.
 <br>7.  Any topic of your choice.
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 <br>All the mistakes in this will be cought by I this time.  Does you think this work are something to be proud of
-<br>Which is the essay James is most proud of.  The one that had the fewest error, of course!  This final sentence, the last phrase, and look at the one before it; they was most perfect.
+<br>Which is James is most proud of.  The homework that had the fewest error, of course!  This final sentence, the last phrase, and look at the one before it; they was most perfect.
 <br><br>
 <br>'''Part B''': Write a total of at least 600 words on one or more of the following topics.  You will receive a score each for (i) technical correctness and (ii) style/substance.

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 <br>1.  The pen is mightier than the sword.  Discuss.
-<br>2.  Suppose you met someone who said, “it can’t hurt to try it!”  But sometimes trying something just once is enough to destroy you.  Explain why.
+<br>2.  “Did you notice that this winter has not had as much snow as last winter?”  We need to limit our energy production so this does not happen again!  Discuss.
-<br>3.  “Did you notice that this winter has not had as much snow as last winter?”  We need to limit our energy production so this does not happen again!  Discuss.
+<br>3.  As the United States grows bigger and more different from place to place, do you think it will ever break up as the Soviet Union did?
-<br>4.  As the United States grows bigger and more different from place to place, do you think it will ever break up as the Soviet Union did?
+<br>4.  Homeschoolers have an influence on society far greater than the percentage of people who homeschool.  Discuss.
-<br>5.  Homeschoolers have an influence on society far greater than the percentage of people who homeschool.  Discuss.
+<br>5.  “Some politicians are masters of deceit, and unfortunately the public is not always smart enough to recognize it.”  Discuss.
-<br>6.  “Some politicians are masters of deceit, and unfortunately the public is not always smart enough to recognize it.”  Discuss.
+<br>6.  Is the world becoming a better place, or a worse one?  Explain your view.
 <br>7.  Any topic of your choice.
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 <br>God given rights belong to all of us: who else would he give them to, other then us?
-<br>“I ain’t making that mistake again”, Joey said.  After all, his friend, not me, were at the game and their wasn't no way I was going to miss it.
+<br>“I ain’t missing that game again”, I told him.  After all, there friend, not me, were at the game and their wasn't no way I was going to miss it.
-<br>Well, lets face it; neither good nor bad news are going to make a difference now.  When you hang around with people who dont now what there doing, I get what I deserve.
+<br>When a stranger showed up sought directons, I told them to not to bother me and my friend.
-<br>I am detirmined to catch all the errors this time..  I am not going to make any more mistakes no more!  Do you think I like being rideculed like this?
+<br>Neither the Patriots nor the Giants are the best team in the NFL this year.  The Packers, lets admit was the finest players.  Just joking ..... no one around hear doubt that the Giants are the most greatest ever!
-<br>This time my paper will be absolutly correct unlike my paper last week.  It will have no missed errors of any kind, that you can be sure of.
+<br>All the mistakes in this will be cought by I this time.  Does you think this work are something to be proud of
 <br><br>
 <br>'''Part B''': Write a total of at least 600 words on one or more of the following topics.  You will receive a score each for (i) technical correctness and (ii) style/substance.

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 <br>Instructor, Andy Schlafly
-<br>'''Part A''': Complete Exercise 41 part (a) on page 161 of the textbook, and self-grade.  Score:__/5.
+<br>'''Part A''': Correct errors in the following:
 <br>God given rights belong to all of us: who else would he give them to, other then us?

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	<br>6. “Deceit is all around us.” Explain why and give some examples, and what can be done about it.		<br>6. “Deceit is all around us.” Explain why and give some examples, and what can be done about it.

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 <br>1. The President needs a memo from you about the millions of illegal immigrants in the United States: grant them amnesty or deport them?
-<br>2. Today is ''Saint'' Valentine’s Day.  Tell us about whom the day is named after.
+<br>2. Today is [[Saint Valentine's Day|''Saint'' Valentine’s Day]].  Tell us about whom the day is named after.
 <br>3. A few years ago federal judge held that Cobb County, Georgia, may not put a disclaimer on biology textbooks saying, “Evolution is a theory, not a fact, regarding the origin of living things.”  Your views?
 <br>4.  The gang member said, “it can’t hurt to try it!”  But sometimes trying something just once is enough to destroy you.  Explain why.