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		<title>Middlesbrough</title>
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&lt;div&gt;'''Middlesbrough''' is a large industrial town in the north-east of [[England]], situated on the south bank of the [[River Tees]] close to the Tees estuary. It is approximately 5km from Teesport, the UK's second-largest port.&lt;br /&gt;
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Middlesbrough was founded in 1830 as a port for the export of [[coal]] from the coalfields of [[County Durham]], brought to the Tees by the [[Stockton &amp;amp; Darlington Railway]], the earliest steam-powered public [[railway]] in the world. The town began to grow rapidly after iron ore was discovered in commercial quantities in the nearby Cleveland Hills in 1850; numerous ironworks were established in Middlesbrough and neighbouring settlements, and Middlesbrough itself was nicknamed Ironopolis and was described by Prime Minister [[W.E. Gladstone]] as &amp;quot;an infant Hercules&amp;quot;. In the late 19th century the discovery of salt reserves nearby brought the migration of much of the British chemical industry to the district; steel and chemicals, though no longer manufactured within the boundaries of Middlesbrough, remain staples of the economy of the [[Teesside]] conurbation.&lt;br /&gt;
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Middlesbrough has a population (2001) of 134,847&amp;lt;ref&amp;gt;http://www.statistics.gov.uk/census2001/pop2001/middlesbrough_ua.asp&amp;lt;/ref&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category:United Kingdom Cities and Towns]]&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<title>Talk:Mystery:Young Hollywood Breast Cancer Victims</title>
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&lt;div&gt;==Solved?==&lt;br /&gt;
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There may be a solution to this, the '''average''' age for being diagnosed with breast cancer is 64, but this doesn't mean that people cannot get breast cancer until they are 64.&lt;br /&gt;
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You have named five cases where breast cancer has been contracted at a younger age, out of a pool of possibly tens of thousands of subjects (noting that you have expanded the definition of Hollywood to include relatively minor Australian celebrities and musicians). This is well in check with broader society, sadly many people do suffer from breast cancer at a young age. Unless the proportion of young people in general suffering breast cancer is different to the proportion of young &amp;quot;Hollywoodians&amp;quot; suffering breast cancer then there really isn't a mystery here to solve.&lt;br /&gt;
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The only way that anyone will be able to demonstrate the possibility that Hollywood promotes breast cancer is by using statistics which show that the average age of breast cancer in Hollywood is significantly lower than that of society in general. [[User:StatsMsn|StatsMsn]] 22:18, 3 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:Medline, one of the largest databases relating to medical articles, returned just two articles for a search of &amp;quot;&amp;quot;Breast Neoplasms (exp)&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;Hollywood&amp;quot;. One of these only referenced Hollywood because to establish a timeframe (it was translated from Japanese, and used the term &amp;quot;Hollywood syndrome&amp;quot; in its title) whereas the other referred to the geographic location of a clinic. I think this establishes that there is no medical evidence supporting the claim that Hollywood somehow increases the likelihood of breast cancer. If you have alternative search terms or databases you want me to use post them here and I will. [[User:StatsMsn|StatsMsn]] 22:46, 3 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:: Conservapedia is not limited to [[liberal]] medical journals.  We are smart enough, I submit, to observe facts ourselves and let the readers draw conclusions.  We do not simply regurgitate readily available information here.  We tell the truth, even if it is censored elsewhere.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 23:19, 3 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::Medline reports from almost all major medical journals, it does not discriminate based on political ideology. All you have done is listed a few cases and suggested that being famous and connected to Hollywood somehow increases the risk of breast cancer. You have not provided any evidence that the average age of breast cancer amongst stars is any less than the broader average. It is an unfortunate fact that young people do get breast cancer, but there is nothing to suggest that rate of young people in Hollywood being diagnosed with breast cancer is any different to the rate of young people in broader society. Until you refute this point you cannot claim that there is a mystery. [[User:StatsMsn|StatsMsn]] 23:26, 3 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
:::Mr. Schlafly, as I can see it, you seem to be a fan of false causality. X happened to this person and that person meets Y criteria therefore the event X is related to the criteria Y. If 5 people with brown hair contracts testicular cancer, does that mean that having brown hair predisposes you to testicular cancer? Just because someone meets one criteria and also fits another criteria does not mean they are related. That is exactly why medical studies are done, to establish if there is '''repeated''' and '''explainable''' links between any two things. You have no idea of these individuals medical history. There are no sources whatsoever to back this claim. Individuals can claim anything they want, it is only statistics and studies that can help justify them. 	&lt;br /&gt;
-	[[User:AndrasK|AndrasK]] 23:40, 3 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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==A Demonstration==&lt;br /&gt;
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It is suggested that Belinda Emmett being diagnosed with breast cancer at the age of 24 shows that Hollywood increases the risk of breast cancer.&lt;br /&gt;
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There are around 20 million people in Australia, it's safe to assume that 10 million of those will be female. Using the statistics on the page 1 in 19,608 women will be diagnosed with breast cancer by the time they're 25, this is approximately 0.0051%. At this rate about 510 Australia women will have been diagnosed with breast cancer by the time they're 25.&lt;br /&gt;
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Belinda Emmett is one person out of 510 who has been diagnosed with Breast cancer, this is a rate of about 0.2%. Now, film and television in Australia employs about 50,000 people [http://www.afact.org.au/factsheets/AFACT_Consumer_Guides_Internet.pdf] (the best figure I could find for now), this is approximately 0.5% of the population. Assuming that camerawomen and writers have also been diagnosed with breast cancer then I see no reason why the rate of women connected with &amp;quot;Hollywood&amp;quot; and who have been diagnosed with breast cancer is any lower than that of the broader population.&lt;br /&gt;
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The reason Hollywood seems to have so many young stars being diagnosed with breast cancer is because these cases are very well publicised, but the sad truth is that many young women are diagnosed with breast cancer every year, and that their cases are largely forgotten. There is no mystery here, and there won't be until someone shows that the average age of breast cancer amongst Hollywood stars is any different to the rest of society. [[User:StatsMsn|StatsMsn]] 23:37, 3 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:Good sir, we don't repeat readily known facts here! This is a crusade, good sir, and we're here to EXPOSE the FACT that HOLLYWOOD causes BREAST cancer IN starlets! [[User:IndianaJ|IndianaJ]] 00:55, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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When are you going to realise that you cannot base statistical conclusions upon a non-random sample?   You are selecting a category of people who are by definition, far, far younger than the normal population (actresses and pop stars being typically in an age range from 18-45).   Therefore, any incidences of breast cancer you find within that population will of course appear to trend younger.   Please, take Statistics 101 before jumping to such ludicrous conclusions - you're simply making a fool of yourself.   [[User:Bongabill|Bongabill]] 14:19, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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: Bongabill, you're clueless.  The 18-45 population of [[Hollywood]] certainly can be compared with the 18-45 general population as to incidence of disease.  I doubt you've taken half the statistics courses that I have.  You have typical [[liberal style]] in trying to intimidate.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 14:35, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sure it can be compared Andy, but you haven't done that.  If you compare the number of young Hollywood breast cancer victims (of course you might want to define what you mean by that first) to the rest of the population in the same age group, fine.  You haven't done that.  You might also want to clarify where you got your 500 from - clearly an estimate, but based on what?  [[User:Murray|Murray]] 17:47, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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: The [[Hollywood]] community is a well-understood population that consists of performers and entertainers in movies, television and music.  Any ambiguity about that population is insignificant.  The incidence of breast cancer in the general population by age is known, and an estimate of a population of 500 female [[Hollywood]] types under age 35 or so who would admit to having breast cancer due to performance demands or openness is a reasonable estimate within a factor of 2 or so.&lt;br /&gt;
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: You're free to make suggestions on improving the accuracy.  But the attempts below to censor the inquiry altogether are, of course, absurd.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 18:29, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Mr.Schalfly, actually, I am a professional statistician with both graduate and post-graduate degrees in the subject, and also a 34 year professional career as a statistician working for the official statistics bureau of a major nation.   Now, ''of course'' you can compare the 'Hollywood' 18-45 population to the general 18-45 population, but first you have to define that population.   How are you defining ''your'' population?   Is it that they are living in &amp;quot;Hollywood&amp;quot; - in which case it might be interesting to examine geographical factors upon the incidence of disease?   No - as I see you are including Australians who live in the UK, people born in six different countries, and it seems none of the members of your data set are actually ''from'' the geographical region of ''Hollywood'', and in fact many of them do not even live there either.   So how are you defining members of your data set?&lt;br /&gt;
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::: Bongabill, we don't fall for the unproven claims of credentials here.  Wikipedia might be a better home for you.  Your claim is absurd that no conclusions can be drawn from comparing disease incidence among [[Hollywood]] types to the general population.  Tell me, did you work for the tobacco industry also in denying that cigarettes cause cancer?--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 15:13, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Secondly, I note that your article does not compare your data set to the general 18-45 population, but instead compares it to the general population of 'all ages', quoting an ''average'' age of diagnosis of 64 - which is clearly outside your terms of reference.    I'm afraid there's absolutely nothing correct here with any of your reasoning, which not only fails Statistics 101, but fails it in the first semester.   This article is specious nonsense.   [[User:Bongabill|Bongabill]] 14:59, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::: Well, I'm glad you're not a professor then.  Or are you going to claim that also???  Your &amp;quot;know nothing&amp;quot; approach and [[liberal denials]] are nonsensical.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 15:13, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::Just to point out, Mr. Schlafly, you fell back on your &amp;quot;record&amp;quot; of statistical courses as evidence to your statistical competency. [[User:AndrasK|AndrasK] 15:27, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::: Yes, I did, in response to [[credential bullying]].--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 18:20, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::::Actually ASchalfly, it was indeed you who first raised the issue of credentials in this thread - your comment &amp;quot;I doubt you've taken half the statistics courses I have&amp;quot; came after Bongabill's first and only comment on Conservapedia, and which never mentioned his or her credentials.  [[User:StatsFan|StatsFan]] 18:52, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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All right Andy, I'll make a couple of suggestions.  I suggest clarifying the basis of the estimate that there are 500 Hollywood women under 35 who would admit to having breast cancer.  I don't understand where the number comes from - what was the method or source used to come up with 500?  If that's a good estimate, your comparison is potentially legitimate.  Then, I would suggest you do an actual statistical test to determine whether the numbers are significantly different. [[User:Murray|Murray]] 18:48, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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: Female rock stars likely to admit to breast cancer (e.g., due to a performance schedule) number on the magnitude of, at most, 50; female movie stars under 35 are perhaps a 100-200, at most; and other female actresses are perhaps another 100-200.  Just look at how many albums and movies are released each year.  Also, note that many stars go out of their way to conceal and deny health problems, understandably so.  If you dispute any of these numbers, then I'd like to hear why.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 18:58, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::I'm not disputing them, I'm asking where they came from.  So you looked up how many albums and movies are typically released in a year and extrapolated from that?  [[User:Murray|Murray]] 19:05, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::: That provides a ballpark estimate.  Given that the incidence in the [[Hollywood]] community is an order of magnitude larger than the general population, ballpark estimates are enough to reveal a problem.&lt;br /&gt;
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::: Note that a ballpark estimate would have -- and should have -- demonstrated that cigarettes cause lung cancer a half century before people accepted it.  Millions of lives would have been saved by acting on the evidence available rather than demanding unnecessary statistical detail.  Surely you don't defend that.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 19:34, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::::Andy, my man, a &amp;quot;ballpark estimate&amp;quot; is one thing. Pulling numbers out y'arse is quite another. If this really means something to you, then go and do some ''proper'' research. Lord knows you've got enough time on your hands. Reliable numbers may or may not be forthcoming, but at least you'll have tried and you'll be able to argue from a much stronger position if you succeed. Meanwhile, I'd quietly retreat from this one if I were you.&lt;br /&gt;
::::Sincerely, --[[User:OscarPeterson|OscarPeterson]] 20:24, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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I wonder how many of those who were included in the list of breast cancer cases would be included in the list of 500.  If that 500 is based on albums and movies released, it appears that many of those women shouldn't be included.  Shirley Temple is the only movie star there.  Most appear to be television actresses, and I suspect many more fall into that category than movie actresses.  So I suspect that 500 is a pretty big underestimate.  Either way though, if you want to make the case, you should include a real statistical analysis.  For example, in the last sentence, you could say ''There is likely no more than 1000 in the population of Hollywood types under age 35 who would have publicly disclose breast cancer. The list above has 8 cases (and growing). The expected rate is only 1.5 out of 1000 in that age group.  A chi-square test of proportions indicates that the difference between these groups is not statistically significant, X&amp;lt;sup&amp;gt;2&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt; (1 df) = 3.62, p = .109.''  [[User:Murray|Murray]] 21:28, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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: Why stop at age 35?  Try applying your approach to age 30.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 22:25, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
::Mainly because I think the numbers given in the article have no basis in reality.  The 500 is said to be based on the number of movies and albums released each year.  According to [http://dissertations.ub.rug.nl/FILES/faculties/feb/2007/s.a.delre/c5.pdf] there are 473 movies each year - I think it's safe to say that nearly all have multiple women who would be included in this list if they had the misfortune to get breast cancer.  And taking a look at the list, it's clear that the article is also referring to television actresses, in the US and across the world.  So I think 500 is a gross underestimate.  Even if the true population of female &amp;quot;Hollywood types&amp;quot; under 30 was 1000 (and I suspect it's more than that), the difference is not significant.  [[User:Murray|Murray]] 23:28, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::: The difference is significant, even if the 500 estimate is low.  Realize that the estimate of 500 is not for all female singers and actresses, but only those who have performance schedules requiring disclosure of a personal health problem.  A soap opera actress would be an example, of which there are perhaps only 50 in the relevant age group.&lt;br /&gt;
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::: Multiple occurrences of a rarely occurring event are statistically significant, and it's incorrect to claim otherwise.  There is nothing special about a baseball pitcher who throws only one no-hitter, but there is something special about one who throws three no-hitters, which is analogous to the data here.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 23:42, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
::::::Well, see, there's a couple of problems with that analysis.  Let's assume for the moment that your guesstimate of 500 actresses/singers at any one time whose schedules would necessitate an illness disclosure is roughly accurate.  Problems: 1)Your examples are not drawn from a single point in time, but from over a period of decades (which would stretch the 500 to thousands).  2)Many of these women, while well-known, were ill at a time in their life when disclosure would not have been necessary (that is, when they were no longer active, and not part of the 500).  3) Many of your examples are deeply obscure, and certainly not part of the 500.--[[User:RossC|RossC]] 08:59, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::::No, there's definitely something special about a pitcher who throws a no-hitter. -[[User:CSGuy|CSGuy]] 23:54, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:Murry you are compeletly wrong. You are using frequentist statistics which was created by that godless, evolution believing, eugenics supporting, [[liberal]] Fisher. It is inherently [[deceit|deceitful]]. You should instead use that devinly inspired Bayesian satitical methods. I suggest an uniform distribution aprior for your parameter. [[User:DanielB|DanielB]] 22:54, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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==An example of why this is fallacious reasoning==&lt;br /&gt;
# The incidence of homosexuality in the general population is about 2-3%[http://www.catholiceducation.org/articles/homosexuality/ho0095.html].&lt;br /&gt;
# Evangelical preachers Ted Haggard, Paul Barnes, and Roy Clements were found to be homosexuals.&lt;br /&gt;
# Our study shows incidence of homosexuality in Evangelical preachers is far, far greater than the general population and is instead 100%.&lt;br /&gt;
# Therefore, all Evangelicial preachers are gay.&lt;br /&gt;
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Except there's just one thing - we know that's not true.   So what's wrong with the reasoning?   Selective sampling, that's what's wrong.   And which is what you're doing in this article.   [[User:Bongabill|Bongabill]] 14:33, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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: Bongabill, your reasoning is so absurd that it does not merit a response.  Learn how to spell &amp;quot;fallacious&amp;quot; and return only if you can figure that out.  Godspeed.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 14:35, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:Can you point out logical discrepancies between your logic and his? Refusing to respond does not give you credit, it makes you seem even more wrong. If your argument is correct, then why can you not point out problems in his? And by the way, taunting someone regarding one simple spelling error is puerile. [[User:AndrasK|AndrasK]] 14:42, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:: Well, duh, the incidence of homosexuality among evangelical preachers is 3 divided by thousands.  Should I do the arithmetic for you?--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 15:14, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::Andy to try and translate Bongabill's reasoning into simpler terms: '''Selection bias/selective sampling is where the sample you choose for your study is rigged to give an inaccurate result'''. For example, let us suppose that Planned Parenthood did a study into teens and promiscuity and ecluded teens with STDs and tried to use that study to show teens were having &amp;quot;safe sex&amp;quot;. Obviously this would be false since the sample was not ''representative'' of the teenage population. '''Likewise your sample (the list) is inaccurate since it only includes &amp;quot;hollywood&amp;quot; women who ever got breast cancer'''. Also to ignore Bongabill's point and to point out his spelling mistakes smacks of a childish ''ad homniem'' attack, to repeat AndrasK.[[User:Luder|Luder]] 16:05, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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This article is utter nonsense. The reasoning is absurd. It is just laughable. So you can name twenty well-known women who have had breast cancer. I can name twenty women I know who have had breast cancer. Does this mean women of my acquaintance are particularly susceptible? No, it's just a meaningless series of cases, anecdotal evidence of nothing whatsoever. This article is the same. Conservapedia really is a parody of itself! [[User:Humblpi|Humblpi]] 17:20, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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: Folks, your objections are incoherent.  The incidence of breast cancer in the [[Hollywood]] culture can and should be compared to its incidence in the overall population.  I realize that [[deliberate ignorance]] is a trademark [[liberal style]], but you're in the wrong place if you think you're going to censor attempts to compare those rates.  It can and should be done.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 18:19, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::''The incidence of breast cancer in the [[Hollywood]] culture can and should be compared to its incidence in the overall population.'' So where is this done? It is simple (the number of Hollywood types that have breast cancer)/(the number of hollywood types) vs. (the number of the overall population that have breast cancer)/(the number of the overall population). You have failed to provide even the simple mean, neverless the variance in order to conduct a hypothesis test. [[User:DanielB|DanielB]] 18:38, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::DanielB, you're correct, but that's not all - you would also need to conduct a Chi-Squared Test on the result to see whether or not the variance in the data actually had any statistical significance.   Different values are not necessarily statistically significant.   There is no valid or relevant statistical analysis in this article, none whatsoever.   [[User:StatsFan|StatsFan]] 18:44, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::: When the rates are vastly different, as in the case of lung cancer and cigarettes, conclusions can and should be drawn immediately based on the vast differences in the rates.  Of course further investigation is welcome, but unlikely to alter the obvious conclusion.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 18:58, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::::: Vastlty different rates could be the result of the variance of your sample. Your sample size might be too small to draw conclusions or as StatsFan said it might not be significant. Andy you should research statistical hypothesis testing of Student and Fisher instead of being [[deliberate ignorance|deliberalty ignorant]] of them. [[User:DanielB|DanielB]] 19:03, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::::: See my reply to the more intelligent comments by Murray above.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 19:35, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::::::: What does by a factor of 2 mean? Do you mean a probabilty of less than 2% that the difference in means is a result of random sampling? As you have failed to establish a population size, how do you know the degrees of freedom of your t-distribution? You appear to have a vague understanding of statistic hypothesis testing without any actual working knowledge of how it works. [[User:DanielB|DanielB]] 20:42, 4 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just out of curiosity, I'm wondering what you're postulating is the cause of this apparent epidemic of breast cancer amongst the women of the entertainment industry.  A paragraph or two regarding possible causation might help to round out the article.--[[User:RossC|RossC]] 09:04, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
:Based on [[Breast_cancer#Risk_factors|this]], perhaps [[Hollywood values]] encompass poor eating habits and abortions as well. [[User:Feebasfactor|Feebasfactor]] 13:18, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:Those who don't have an open mind about a glaring 5-10x increase in breast cancer incidence in the [[Hollywood]] community are not likely to have an open mind about causation.  The cancer deniers could make a bundle working for the tobacco industry, however.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 13:31, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:: From a factor of 2 to 5 to  10 times increase. These numbers are incredible and would be very impressive if you had any data what so ever to back this up. You have done no statistical analysis all you have done is make up &amp;quot;ballpark&amp;quot; numbers which suit your hypothesis. Get some data, analyse it and submit it to a medical journal if this as rock solid as you say. Otherwise there is no &amp;quot;mystery cause of Hollywood breast cancer&amp;quot; as you have failed to establish it is any higher than you might expect in the general population.  [[User:DanielB|DanielB]] 02:01, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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So was I... on the right track then? I'd like to think I was being open-minded about causation by considering possible factors, but perhaps I've missed it anyway. :( [[User:Feebasfactor|Feebasfactor]] 18:01, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Geez, Andy, you're not going soft on us, are you?  I don't think you've ever censored yourself before in deference to the closed-minded.  Would you mind if I worked up a paragraph on causation, or would you rather just skip it?  (I don't want to step on your toes) --[[User:RossC|RossC]] 14:18, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::: RossC, I can't tell if you're serious or not.  If you're serious, then please try to improve the entry.  Godspeed.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 16:00, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
:::: I am indeed serious (but don't fret--I get that a lot).  I'll whip up a paragraph on possible causation when I have a bit more time (tomorrow, hopefully).--[[User:RossC|RossC]] 13:13, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::::: You probably &amp;quot;get that a lot&amp;quot; because most of your edits, like your recent one on the Main Page, are not to be taken seriously.  Try some substantive edits.  You'll benefit yourself.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 14:27, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::This does seem like a story that's not being covered in the MSM, and I think you've uncovered a real 'sleeper' news story with this original research.   Do you have a press agent who can help you publicize it - can you get this into the news 'wires'?   I'm sure various Hollywood press organs would be VERY interested in this story - why don't you try and get this to the LA Times, or Variety, or the Hollywood Reporter?   This is Front Page material!   [[User:RobCross|RobCross]] 14:07, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::: Please tell them for us, RobCross.  As you can see, the [[liberals]] are not happy about this, which means the publications you cite will not publish it.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 16:00, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Andy, maybe you should submit it to ''JPANDS''.  [[User:Murray|Murray]] 11:00, 9 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Aschlafly, its not that 'liberals are unhappy with this' hence it wont get published any where. Its that if you tried to publish this you'd get laughed at because your methodology is so poor. If the was a causation somewhere do you really think you'd be the first person to spot it?&lt;br /&gt;
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: Ah, there's that [[liberal]] over-reliance on mockery, point 25 of [[liberal style]].  You follow your style book well, AdenJ.  Fortunately, not everyone is afraid of being &amp;quot;laughed at,&amp;quot; particularly when the mockery is done to conceal causation of a deadly disease.  It's not very funny when you realize what you're trying to conceal.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 23:56, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ahhhhh, again Aschlafly you dont know anything at all about me so I wouldn't throw around the liberal rubbish. Not that I have to prove anything to you however I will advise that in my countrys elections I vote for the right. Anyways my point is that this 'article' is not all convincing to anyone.&lt;br /&gt;
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What is the hypothesis about causation?  [[User:Murray|Murray]] 23:57, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:Andy, if you wouldn't mind... would you like to pose a possible hypothesis as to what causes this apparent increased rate of breast cancer in Hollywood? What do you think is the explanation to this mystery? I've taken a guess already, although I don't know if I'm on the right track. [[User:Feebasfactor|Feebasfactor]] 23:17, 8 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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I would first like to ask if 'Hollywood' is appropriate in the title.  How many of these are Hollywood stars?  Soap operas, British singers, etc.  Shirley Temple retired from movies at 21 in 1949.  She had been out of Hollywood for 20 years when she was diagnosed.  And is 40 'young'?  That also brings up the time frame question - does including a person who was diagnosed with cancer about 40 years ago fit in with trying to correlate it with people from today?&lt;br /&gt;
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There is also the question of diagnosis.  Early diagnosis is the key to identifying and surviving a battle with cancer.  People who are wealthy tend to go to the doctor more often, routine check ups and preventive care rather than going to the emergency room.  The people listed tend to be in the upper end of the pay spectrum and thus would go to and have access to better medical resources.  As such, they would detect cancer at a younger age than those that don't have access to these resources.&lt;br /&gt;
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The Mayo clinic suggests starting breast self exams at age 20.[http://www.mayoclinic.com/health/breast-self-exam/WO00026] I am curious if the women here would speak up about the age they started doing breast self exams and the age range that their doctors have informed them that breast cancer can develop along with the risk factors.&lt;br /&gt;
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There is also the selection of data.  Actresses are famous and everything they do or is done to them tends to find itself in the media.  These are the things one would read at a supermarket check out (why is it even here - isn't it the liberal media and National Enquirer that is supposed to have an obsession with celebrities?).  This ignores the millions of non-newsworthy men and women and the chances that they get cancer.  The young woman down the street who is fighting breast cancer - thats not news and so it doesn't show up beyond a number somewhere.  It is just easier to find a list and news reports of famous people.&lt;br /&gt;
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If there is any statistical significance of this, the math should be shown by the person making the claim. --[[User:Rutm|Rutm]] 14:34, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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: The rates of breast cancer by age in the general population are well-known, and the rates in [[Hollywood]] are 5-10x times higher.  You don't work for tobacco companies, do you?  We don't need to deny the obvious and await 30 more years of [[censorship]].--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 16:04, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:: Could you point to any study or news article akin to [http://www.sfgate.com/cgi-bin/article.cgi?f=/c/a/2003/05/30/BA70131.DTL]?  Have you ruled out other known risk factors?  Where is the data to support this?  I would be interested to see the data (rather than an list of 20 singers, actresses, and notables that at some time resided in Los Angeles) that supports the assertion. --[[User:Rutm|Rutm]] 16:11, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::: I don't think that Mr Schlafly has to eliminate other risk factors. The claim is only that breast cancer is more prevalent amongst young 'Hollywood types' than others, not that the state of being a 'Hollywood type' causes breast cancer. He doesn't even claim that this this difference is statistically significant. To establish his claim all he has to do is come up with clear definitions of 'Hollywood type' and 'young', determine the size of this group (presumably fewer than the 546,969[http://www.imdb.com/database_statistics] actresses in the imdb database), take a representative sample thereof, determine the rate of early breast cancer within that group and compare it to the general population. --[[User:Jalapeno|Jalapeno]] 17:24, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::: If anyone would like to work from some data - [http://statecancerprofiles.cancer.gov/cgi-bin/quickprofiles/profile.pl?06&amp;amp;055#incidence] has a table for breast cancer deaths by county in California.  Orange county slightly above the mean in California for incidence, but is certainly not at the top of the list.  I have yet to see any data suggesting the National Cancer Institutes's data is incorrect. --[[User:Rutm|Rutm]] 17:28, 5 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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The above [[liberal denial]]s are almost as interesting as the entry itself.  Observe how no one objected to &amp;quot;Rutm&amp;quot;s observation that breast cancer deaths are higher in Orange County, yet every [[liberal]] here objected to the possibility that breast cancer rates are higher among [[Hollywood]] types.  Ever here the expression &amp;quot;he protests too much&amp;quot;?  It applies with full force here.  There is nothing logical to the protests above, which merely underscores how important it is to publicize this information.  The more it is irrationally denied, the more persuasive it becomes.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 20:49, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:Andy: (a) Hollywood isn't in Orange County.  LA County is below the state average, according to Rutm's link.  Even if it were higher, that says nothing about the rate in Hollywood, or among &amp;quot;Hollywood types&amp;quot;.  (b) Some of the comments above may be a bit strident.  However, they raise challenges that haven't been answered.  If you want to make this case, it would be better to show your methods and to actually do the math.  The current approach is not convincing to those who understand statistics.  [[User:Murray|Murray]] 21:47, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Andy the protest above are not about your conclusions they are about your compelete lack of data. What you are lacking is data. Rutm's observations are valid because they are based on data, something you lack. [[User:DanielB|DanielB]] 22:08, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::: Murray and DanielB miss the point.  I don't think we've seen such emotional denials of a health problem since the tobacco executives denied their products cause cancer, and they kept insisting on more and more and more data.  The odds of finding three women victimized by breast cancer in their 20s is astronomically small, and requires a very large population sample.  Three examples from the small community of [[Hollywood]], along with many other striking examples of young breast cancer victims, suggests a problem.&lt;br /&gt;
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::: However, judging by the emotional denials, it's clear your minds are not open about this.  You're not investigating further yourself; instead, the deniers are resorting to put-downs (e.g., &amp;quot;not convincing to those who understand statistics&amp;quot;).  As is said, &amp;quot;you protest too much.&amp;quot;--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 22:15, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::: Is it a small community? Do you have the exact number of people in this community or do you just have this strange 100-200 numbers from nowhere? You are making numbers up on gut instinct and calling it a sample. You would not get an arguement if you even had properly collected statistics. &lt;br /&gt;
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:::: As for the tabbaco companies thay argued that correlation dose not equal causation. Something you yourself argued on many occasion, because it is true. Life expectancy goes up with the rate of TV ownership in a country, would you advocate giving third world nations TVs to increase there lifespan? [[User:DanielB|DanielB]] 22:33, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Demanding scientific evidence and accurate statistics is not protesting too much, it is common sense. [[User:AndrasK|AndrasK]] 22:22, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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The put-downs are on both sides, Andy (&amp;quot;emotional denial&amp;quot;, &amp;quot;your minds are not open&amp;quot;).  How about a compromise - if you will explain how you derived your sample size, a productive discussion can take place about whether or not this indicates an increased risk of breast cancer.  Also, did you note above that the breast cancer rate in the county that Hollywood is in is actually lower than the state average? [[User:Murray|Murray]] 22:42, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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: Let's see if any of the deniers here will admit that, yes, it is quite possible that breast cancer incidence is higher in the [[Hollywood]] community than the general population.  It's irrational if that admission is not forthcoming.  (By the way, the physical county in which the town of Hollywood is located is obviously irrelevant because the issue is the lifestyle.)--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 22:54, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::I disagree that your comments are not put-downs in the same sense, but we can disagree there.  I apologize for the comment.  I pointed out that Hollywood is not in Orange County because your comment above used the rate in Orange County to support your argument.  Sure, I will happily admit that it is ''possible'' that the breast cancer rate in the Hollywood district of Los Angeles is higher than in the general population.  It would be a powerful statement if it could be shown, given that the rate in all of LA County is lower than the rest of the state.  However, I am not convinced by the arguments currently put forth here.  As I mentioned above, it would be helpful to explain your methods, particularly the method for determining the size of the sample.  It would also be useful to define &amp;quot;Hollywood types&amp;quot;, because it appears that many of those in the list, including 1 in the under 30 section, did not live in Hollywood.  Research in any field is heavily dependent on explanations of how variables were defined and measured, and on descriptions of how the sample was derived and who it was composed of.  [[User:Murray|Murray]] 23:15, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::I also happily admit that &amp;quot;it is quite possible that breast cancer incidence is higher in the Hollywood community than the general population&amp;quot;, and I'd be very happy to see Aschlafly's hypothesis proven, or disproven, or indeed to see any meaningful data one way or the other. My objection to this sort of pseudo-science is not emotional, and does not represent liberal or any other sort of denial. It's simply that the &amp;quot;conclusion&amp;quot; does not arise from any data. It's a misuse of epidemiological and statistical methods, an appeal to &amp;quot;science&amp;quot; merely to support a prejudice. For a start, you cannot make any comment on prevalence without first defining the population you are using as the denominator. I suggest that should be the first step. If you then ask a suitable question, and apply suitable methods to answer that question, that would be a couple more steps in the right direction. And if you can find anything that suports the contention that breast cancer is more prevalent among &amp;quot;Hollywood types&amp;quot; I'm sure even the &amp;quot;liberal medical journals&amp;quot; would be very interested in the study. [[User:Humblpi|Humblpi]] 01:38, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Mr.Schlafly, we will ''happily'' admit that breast cancer ''might'' be higher in 'Hollywood' - if you can show that is the case, it is certainly really interesting, and some decent , substantiated research with figures you can stand over would make for a really major news story - and your work would be celebrated.   '&amp;quot;Women working in the entertainment industry develop breast cancer at a much higher rate than normal'&amp;quot; is indeed headline news.   We can help you to make a rock-solid case.   Here's how to make your case watertight:&lt;br /&gt;
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1.   Define the population.   It seems you're not really intending ''Hollywood'' to be a geographical term here, instead I believe you wish it to refer to 'women between 18-45 working in the entertainment business' - regardless of physical location.   Nothing wrong with this so far, that's a perfectly reasonable population to analyse.   Please correct my definition if you you think I'm paraphrasing you incorrectly.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
2.   Determine the size of that population.   This is where it starts to get tricky.   A global figure for young women between the ages of 18-45 could be estimated easily enough, but the number of people involved in the entertainment business may be harder to determine.   Do you wish your research to include, for example, hairdressers, make-up artists, production designers and art directors, as they would all work with the actors and singers and presumably work in a similar 'moral milleu'.   One problem here is that these women would typically work in the presence of chemicals, some of which may or may not be carcinogenic, which would need to be factored into the equations.   Another issue is - where does one include women from?   Are young Chinese actresses as likely to succumb to the perceived 'moral milleu' of the film business of Hong Kong (not known for its strict moral code either).    Might they be similarly affected?   What about Indian girls in Bollywood?   I notice that you are including Australians and UK residents, but what about French, German, Italians, etc?&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
3.   Assuming you can eventually determine the total size of the population, then determine the rates of breast cancer in that total population.   This will be difficult, lengthy research, but it should be possible.   It would likely take many years of research though, as you will require data from health monitoring organizations around the globe.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
4.   Now factor in family medical histories, ethnic predispositions, working conditions, lifetime exposure to carcinogens, birth patterns, etc - and filter your data for these.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
5.   Compare the breast cancer rates of your study to the breast cancer rates of the global population in general.   Again, this shouldn't be too hard.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
6.   Test any differences in your discovered cancer rates for statistical significance.   Where you discover a trend, dig deeper into that data to ensure you are correct.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
7.   Publish, and celebrate good research!&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Your hypothesis is interesting, but as yet unproven.   But if we can be of any assistance, let us know.   [[User:StatsFan|StatsFan]] 11:58, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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First, Murray, the popular term &amp;quot;Hollywood&amp;quot; refers to an ''industry'', not a place.  Yes, I know, there is a small town called &amp;quot;Hollywood&amp;quot;, but that is not what anyone means when they speak of the culture, lifestyle, values and industry of &amp;quot;Hollywood&amp;quot;, as we are here.  I'm astonished, frankly, that you take such a narrow, literal meaning of the word.&lt;br /&gt;
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Second, I'm gratified to have wrestled out an admission for all here that, yes, Hollywood types may have higher and younger incidence of breast cancer than the general population.  So why all the fuss?  Read the comments above and anyone objective would see a determination to censor a discussion and investigation of something that all now admit is quite possible.&lt;br /&gt;
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Third, looking at the data from a small population of successful, performing female pop singers, who number no more than 100, the rate of young breast cancer is astounding and many times, even orders of magnitude, higher than the rate in the general population.  It's unmistakable.&lt;br /&gt;
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Fourth, there are medical reasons why one would expect, without seeing any data, that Hollywood actresses would have higher rates of breast cancer.  An astute, objective observer would expect it without seeing a single patient or reviewing data about a single case.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 14:08, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:Andy, I interpreted your reference to the &amp;quot;small community&amp;quot; as referring to the town itself.  Apparently I misinterpreted.  Nobody is attempting to censor any discussion.  I am in fact trying to have a discussion.  I will ask again, would you please explain the methods that you used to derive these numbers, particularly the sample sizes but also the number of cancer diagnoses?  If you are correct, there is nothing to lose, and you can only gain from being transparent.  I have my doubts as to whether the population is truly as small as you say.  However, if you can show that it is, then your hypothesis is correct.  This is a matter of statistics, not of ideology.  An intro stats text will go into detail about why it is important to be clear and detailed about methodology, and that is what is missing here.  &lt;br /&gt;
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:Out of curiosity, what are those medical reasons?  Regardless of what one would expect, one needs to show that the data back up the expectation.  &lt;br /&gt;
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:Finally, the &amp;quot;fuss&amp;quot; is not about the possibility.  It is about making a claim and showing data that are not clear.  It's possible that any community has a higher rate of breast cancer.  Ashkenazi Jewish women, for example, are at greater risk for BRCA1 and BRCA2 mutations that are associated with breast cancer.  But we know that because clear, detailed data have been published. [[User:Murray|Murray]] 14:19, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::*First, yes, I understand you are referring to an industry and not a geographic location.   There's nothing inherently wrong about you attempting to do so.   '''Except''' that if you are defining it so, you need to define the 'what', 'how' and 'where' of that industry.   Geographical locations make research easy, as essentially you can simply start by analysing data within US zip codes.   But defining members of an industry is hard, particularly since the industry is global, and contains many people in many roles.   Sadly, the UN, WHO, or any other organization doesn't break out its health, age, income, etc statistics into 'pop singers' and 'actresses', so we must instead do the work ourselves.   So - how do you intend to define your population?&lt;br /&gt;
::*Secondly, it is one thing to admit that a possibility exists.   But is entirely another to admit that that possibility is indeed the case.   Would you be prepared to admit that web workers like yourself are more prone to testicular cancer?   If I can find thirty people who work on the web and have testicular cancer, will you believe me?   It may be so, and of course it's possible, but IS it so?   Only proper research can tell.   But if I claim it, you have every right to disagree with me.&lt;br /&gt;
::*Thirdly, here is where I must begin to disagree with you, and for very simply reasons.  No, it is NOT possible to make assumptions based upon a non-random data set comprising members you have selected who have shown the condition.   The population sample you provide is statistically biased, as it is non-random, and therefore does not properly represent the total population - all actresses and pop stars, including those who ''both do '''and do not''''' have breast cancer.   You have selected it to only include actresses and pop singers with breast cancer.   This sample does not include the very many pop singers and actresses who did ''not'' develop breast cancer.   This common mistake has a name in statistical analysis, and is referred to as '[[Selection Bias]]'.   Using the same method, I could equally list twenty CEO's of technology companies who are bald and claim that being a CEO causes baldness.   But it would not make it true.    I refer you to the famous 'joke' statistic that the rise and fall of the population of penguins in the Arctic is extremely tightly correlated with the UK Conservative party holding Government office (or Arts funding - the stories vary).   These examples and others are used to show that [[Correlation]] '''never''' automatically implies [[Causation]].   As a result of your selection bias, it is false to say that your conclusion &amp;quot;is unmistakeable&amp;quot; - though it doesn't for a second mean we shouldn't investigate your claim.  &lt;br /&gt;
::*Finally, what are those medical reasons?   What is your proposed theory of causation?'   Why would an acute observer expect it?   If you can be a little more clear, it would help.&lt;br /&gt;
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::Your case remains completely unproven speculation, but is nevertheless interesting.   [[User:StatsFan|StatsFan]] 14:31, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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If I understand your theory correctly, the maths for your theory would work as follows (please correct me if I am wrong):&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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First, evaluate Global Breast Cancer Incidence in the [[Control Population]], i.e. the 'world at large':&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Note that since our hypothesis is that 'Hollywood' or 'lifestyle values' are what we are testing for (since we assume you don't intend to prove that there are, for example, more carcinogens in movie trailers than elsewhere), it would be important to exclude from 'B' those breast cancers caused by hereditary, environmental factors and other non-lifestyle factors.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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If Z &amp;gt; Y, and passes the Chi Square Test, you're definitely onto something, and quite likely a large amount of funding would immediately be available for further research.   But with A, B, W and X as yet undefined, as here, we don't have proof yet of the trend.  But at least we have defined the numbers we are looking for, and we can continue to study your theory.   [[User:StatsFan|StatsFan]] 17:57, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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: Your symbols add nothing here, and your conclusion that &amp;quot;quite likely a large amount of funding would immediately be available for further research&amp;quot; is absurd.  The same hysterically [[liberal]] reaction posted on this talk page by others above would great any application for funding of this hypothesis.  Such application would find the trashcan before a closed-minded recipient looked beyond its first page.&lt;br /&gt;
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: That is all the more amusing when one realizes that there is a fundamental reason why [[Hollywood]] types must have higher breast cancer incidence than the general public.  Get past the symbols and look at this with an open mind, and you'll see it too.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 19:51, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::If you disagree with the methodology described above, what mathematical methodology do you instead propose?   And what is this &amp;quot;fundamental reason&amp;quot; you refer to?   I'm just curious as to how to prove this hypothesis.   [[User:StatsFan|StatsFan]] 19:54, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::: I don't object to the methodology, but I don't think it adds anything meaningful to the issue.  If I asked whether a pitcher of unknown name who has thrown at least three no-hitters should likely be in the Hall of Fame, your methodology is not going help answer the statistical question.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 20:00, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::: The methodology allows other people to reproduce it and not require having an open mind or a statement from an authority.  In making the claim &amp;quot;Hollywood types have higher breast cancer incidence than the general public&amp;quot; you are making a statement that can be tested.  Thus, people want to know how you came to that conclusion and how to test it for themselves so they can see if it is true or not. --[[User:Rutm|Rutm]] 20:03, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::::OK, great - we're on the same path then!   I'm delighted we can see eye-to-eye on something at last.   As to your analogy, it is interesting, but kind of irrelevant to this discussion.   So, if you agree with the math, then let's get to work!&lt;br /&gt;
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::::We know that C = approx. 1 in 93, from the NCI figures.   But those numbers refer to all women below 45.   The rate for women between 18-45 would be higher, we could make a reasonable guess at, say, 1 in 70 (since the rate for women below 50 is 1 in 50).   And you suggest a rate that is an order of magnitude higher than normal, correct?   That would be, say, 1 in 7.   Now, we need to establish the value of both W and X, the total population of women 18-45 who are in the entertainment business, and those within that population who have been diagnosed with breast cancer.   How do we obtain those numbers?   [[User:StatsFan|StatsFan]] 20:08, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
:::::Do note that this is the number of women in the entertainment business at some point in their lives (Shirley Temple was retired from the industry for 20 years when she was diagnosed) over the past 80 years (Shirley Temple was born in 1928).  This would include singers (country? bluegrass? pop? rock? musicals? vaudeville?), actresses (stage? TV? movies?).  Also be sure to include people from around the world in this - Australian soap opera star, Puerto Rican actress, Norwegian actress.  It would help to know what the hypothesis being tested is beyond the vague &amp;quot;people in entertainment.&amp;quot; --[[User:Rutm|Rutm]] 20:28, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Andy, I have 2 questions for you.  First, will you share your methods for determining the size of the sample and the number of cases?  Second, what is your hypothesis as to causality?  Thanks.  [[User:Murray|Murray]] 20:35, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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'''REPLY TO THE ABOVE''':  We have the data that we have.  We don't have a double-blind controlled study of millions of subjects.  We never will.  Smokers went 100 years without the kind of study the naysayers demand here.  Does that mean no one could conclude that smoking causes lung cancer?  Of course not.  Watch your relatives who smoke drop dead and then don't ignore it.  Ditto here for breast cancer and [[Hollywood]].  Tobacco companies to this day claim the studies are inclusive and more studies are needed.  If determined enough, one can often claim that.  The more interesting -- and more important -- challenge is to draw the conclusions that can be drawn from the data that are available.  Look at the very small population of pop female singers and breast cancer incidence, open your minds, and don't deny something that has deadly consequences.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 20:45, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::I take it you are refusing to share your methods, though it would be nice if you would just say that.  ''We have the data that we have.''  True enough, but you're the only one who knows what it looks like.  [[User:Murray|Murray]] 21:16, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Mr.Schalfly, you keep suggesting that people are somehow disagreeing about the deadly risks of tobacco, but no-one is - they are incontestable, and the CEO's of tobacco companies, and their lawyers, just look utterly foolish as they make their arguments that they are not deadly.   But this thesis of yours, to be similarly incontestable, needs to be have solid reasoning behind it.   I doubt you'd disagree with that?   For example, if you are suggesting that approximately 1 in 7 is the risk factor for women between 18-45 in the 'Hollywood' industry, and you have listed 20 individuals, are you suggesting that the total population of 'Hollywood' types is really just 140 women?   I'm simply trying to get to the bottom of the maths.    [[User:StatsFan|StatsFan]] 20:55, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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One other note - the point you make about &amp;quot;watch your smoker relatives drop dead&amp;quot; is an excellent example of selective sampling.   I had two uncle's who smoked until they died in their nineties, neither of smoking-related illnesses.   It doesn't prove for a moment though that smoking does not kill - it simply shows the effects of selective bias.   [[User:StatsFan|StatsFan]] 20:59, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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: StatsFan, of course counterexamples (your uncles) do not disprove causation.  But examples often do indicate causation when it is a rarely expected phenomenon.&lt;br /&gt;
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: Again, I ask you: is it likely that an unnamed pitcher who threw three no-hitters had an overall career worthy of the Hall of Fame?  That is a statistical question that you should be able to answer, but your incessant demand for more data is not going to help you solve it.  There is no further specific data to be disclosed in that question, nor is additional data necessary to answer it.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 21:19, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::I am indeed confused by your metaphor.   For me to know the answer to that I would need to know if it was common for a pitcher to throw three no-hitters, and if many Hall f Famers had thrown three no-hitters?    If I'm correct (and I apologize if I am confused by your analogy), you are suggesting that since the data you present is 'obvious', then young Hollywood women do indeed contract breast cancer at higher rates, yes?   [[User:StatsFan|StatsFan]] 21:24, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::: StatsFan, the only info you need is the obvious one that no more than a few no-hitters occur each baseball season.  &lt;br /&gt;
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::: More generally, note that if you confine yourself to well-funded studies, then you limit yourself to what the funders of those studies want for their money.  I'm interested in going outside of the narrow sphere of funded studies and looking at real-world data to draw important conclusions that no one is willing to fund and advertise.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 21:48, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Then let's look at the data.  Refusal to allow your conclusions to be examined (which is the effect of hiding your methods) suggests something to hide.  In addition to knowing the frequency of no hitters, it would be important to know the number of games pitched.  That's the piece that we're missing here.  [[User:Murray|Murray]] 23:04, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::::But ''how many'' is 'a few' no-hitters?   More than three, less than three?   The answer affects whether they get into the Hall of Fame or not!    As for going straight to real-world data, that's totally fine with me - I encourage you to go beyond the regular data, and I'll help.   But wherever we get the data from, we STILL need to know two numbers:&lt;br /&gt;
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::::A)  Total number of young women between 18-45 in the 'Hollywood' business globally; and&lt;br /&gt;
::::B)   Total number of those women who have contracted breast cancer.&lt;br /&gt;
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::::Am I correct?   [[User:StatsFan|StatsFan]] 22:11, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::::: This obviously does require orignal research as no one has so far put up a study that is already done. If you are as you say &amp;quot;interested in going outside of the narrow sphere of funded studies and looking at real-world data to draw important conclusions&amp;quot; then that is what need to do, but this is the problem. You have a list of some names, what you don't have is&lt;br /&gt;
:::::# A working definition of 'Hollywood types'&lt;br /&gt;
:::::# The number of women in the age range you are interested in that meet your definition of Hollywood type.&lt;br /&gt;
:::::# The number of women in the age range you are interested in your definition of Hollywood type who have had breast cancer.&lt;br /&gt;
:::::If you had these three things then you would be able to do the test discribed above and be able to draw importatnt conclusions. All you have now is your list, some rather arbitrary and vague numbers, which to be honest, you just made-up based on what you think is right and a hypothesis which is testable which you have not done. [[User:DanielB|DanielB]] 23:55, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Why doesnt Aschlafly answer these simple questions? &lt;br /&gt;
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::The answer is obvious. He cannot. Or perhaps he will, after he makes up some &amp;quot;Schlafly statistics.&amp;quot;--[[User:Whorton|Whorton]] 22:07, 8 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Bias ==&lt;br /&gt;
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One issue that I don't see addressed explicitly enough above (though I may have missed it, in which case apologies) is that of bias. I'll pick out just two sources of bias that (as far as I can see) completly undermine the article:&lt;br /&gt;
# What is the source of information on breast cancer cases among &amp;quot;Hollywood types&amp;quot;? It comes from the media, and is therefore heavily influenced by the Hollywood publicity machine and the priorities of the newspapers, TV channels, etc. The control group (the rest of the world, other female residents of California, whatever) is not subject to the same influences. Nobody reports a story about &amp;quot;32-year-old housewife dies of breast cancer&amp;quot;. The only way to do this comparison is to ignore all information that comes from the media, and use an equivalent data source - which I guess means official epidemiological data - for both Hollywood and control groups.&lt;br /&gt;
# The selection of cases in the &amp;quot;Hollywood&amp;quot; group is subject to serious ''selection bias'', because a woman of roughly the right age and roughly the right profession is assigned to the group after (and perhaps, one suspects, ''because of'') the diagnosis. You must ''first'' define the population (the denominator) and ''then'' look to see how many of those who are in that population have the condition (the numerator).&lt;br /&gt;
I'd be very interested to see (a) the hypothetical causal link between a high incidence of breast cancer and &amp;quot;Hollywood&amp;quot; and (b) some proper data, properly gathered and analysed. Insistence that &amp;quot;it's obvious&amp;quot;, and labeling those who ask for evidence as &amp;quot;liberals&amp;quot;, is no substitute for a solid hypothesis, hard data, and a proper analysis. [[User:Humblpi|Humblpi]] 06:05, 8 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:Actually HumblePi is on to another problem that has been overlooked. You should start by defining 'Hollywood Types' before you collect your data not afterwards. [[User:DanielB|DanielB]] 21:35, 8 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Actually, DanielB, that's not quite true - Mr.Schlafly has agreed that the Control Population is defined as &amp;quot;Global Women 18-45&amp;quot;, and the study population is &amp;quot;Global Women 18-45 who are Performers in the Entertainment Business and have been diagnosed with breast cancer&amp;quot;, but he has not yet provided figures for the former population - either we are waiting for him to provide these figures, or we are expected to calculate them, I'm not sure.   He has however, provided us with the second population, a total of 20 women.   However, I believe he needs to be a little more precise, as we need to more clearly define ''when'' these women were diagnosed, how far back in time we must do this study, how long they must have been in the business for, and a few other conditions.   We also need a little more information from his as to his theory of causation - I think the suggestion is that somehow 'lifestyle' are involved, in which case we'll need to filter the Control Population for these lifestyle traits - and it's hard to do so without the details of what it is about the lifestyle we are to investigate.   Mr.Schlafly?   [[User:StatsFan|StatsFan]] 22:40, 8 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::No – the  study population cannot have “and have been diagnosed with breast cancer” as part of its definition. You must determine a study population and a control population before you look for breast cancer cases, and both groups must include women who may or may not have BC. The study population is “women in the entertainment industry,” or “Hollywood women.” [[User:Humblpi|Humblpi]] 05:55, 9 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Folks, the comments above are long on talk and insults and short on insights.  If none of the above naysayers are even willing to figure out why [[Hollywood]] types are expected to have higher incidence of breast cancer without even having to look at any data, then I'm wasting my time on this page.&lt;br /&gt;
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In response to the request for a population, by the way, simply take the roughly 100 or so female pop singers (which I think I suggested before).--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 23:13, 8 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:It's not legitimate to take those 100 without knowing how the number was determined.  Why the reluctance to clarify?  And the cause is completely orthogonal to the question of whether the rate is elevated. [[User:Murray|Murray]] 23:48, 8 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:I’m sorry, Aschlafly, but I really have no idea what you mean. What is obvious? Why do you expect Hollywood types to have a higher incidence of breast cancer? But in any case (as Murray says), the hypothetical causal link is completely irrelevant to the study methods. And you have presented no data that provide any evidence whatsoever whether the incidence in Hollywood is higher, lower, or the same as that in the global population. Various people have pointed out flaws in the methodology. If you are not prepared to accept the help that is being offered, that's a pity. The ''Trustworthy Encyclopedia'' really should use trustworthy methods in its analysis. [[User:Humblpi|Humblpi]] 05:56, 9 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:It seems to me, (and forgive me if I'm wrong), but ''besides'' all of these young(ish) women being in show business (Hollywood-types) '''and''' being victims of breast cancer, thay all (must have) put their careers before the thought and &amp;quot;action&amp;quot; of having a family. It is a well known factor in risk assessment for BC that delaying childbirth or having an abortion has the likely but (of course) unsought side-effect of breast cancer. The woman so situated usually has the choice to advance her career '''or''' start her family but (often) the one comes at the expense of the other. [[User:MargeryCampbell|MargeryCampbell]] 12:45, 9 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:: Exactly right.  God bless you for stating what should have been obvious to everyone else on this page.  All who commented above on this page, please take note of what Margery Campbell (whom I do not know, but am honored to learn from) has just said.--[[User:Aschlafly|Aschlafly]] 13:07, 9 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::But that simply ''doesn't make sense''. Of the first five in the list, one is the '''daughter''' of an actress, and one had two children in her early 20s. Not that this is even relevant - every time someone points out a flaw in your logic, you move the goalposts.[[User:PashaSuez|PashaSuez]] 15:19, 9 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<title>Talk:The Golden Compass</title>
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&lt;div&gt;The movie was a disappointment to atheists because it toned down the anti-religious message of the book. See [http://www.spiked-online.com/index.php?/site/article/4169/ Frank Furedi] --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] &amp;lt;sup&amp;gt;[[User talk:Ed Poor|Talk]]&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt; 16:44, 10 December 2007 (EST)&lt;br /&gt;
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:They don't have to worry.  The director made it clear that he's only doing that with the first movie to get in an young audience, then he's going to unleash the full anti-God diatribe.  I feel sorry for those parents who believe they are allowing their children to watch a regular fun kids film. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 17:47, 10 December 2007 (EST)&lt;br /&gt;
::i don't want to seem like of those liberals that always has to get a word in edgewise (even though i ''am'' one of those liberals) but isn't it up to the parents to research the things their children watch instead of letting them jump into something blindly? I'm curious as to what people think.--[[User:Incide|Incide]] 17:44, 24 January 2008 (EST)&lt;br /&gt;
:::That's absurd. On that note, I don't remember the death of any god being a major plotpoint. One of the gay angels, yes. Death of a god? Not so much. [[User:Barikada|Barikada]] 19:24, 24 January 2008 (EST)&lt;br /&gt;
::::I'm pretty sure 'God' died, Barikada. There's a whole scene about an incredibly withered, ancient angel slumped on a palanquin. It's just that in that scene, Pullman never mentions Him by name. I actually thought it was quite a clever literary technique - dethroning Him in figurative terms and all that. :D [[User:Underscoreb|Underscoreb]] 17:22, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Pullman himself discusses his views and why he wrote the books, and it's not just to strike a blow against authoritarianism; this article will not be morphed to say as much. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 19:22, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Learntogether==&lt;br /&gt;
Please, let's not start an edit war. I understand you want to revert my edits[[http://www.conservapedia.com/index.php?title=The_Golden_Compass&amp;amp;diff=448450&amp;amp;oldid=448385]], but can we discuss them here first? Young adult fiction is generally written for readers between 12 and 18 [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Young_adult_literature]. I know we're not big on citing Wikipedia here, but it's not like literary demographics are a controversial subject...&lt;br /&gt;
As for Pullman's comments, fair enough - although he says it's an attack on any system in which control is enforced through faith. Perhaps instead of reverting it though, you could simply edit that specific section and add content. So with that in mind, do you think we could revert the reversion of the reversion? :D [[User:Underscoreb|Underscoreb]] 19:29, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:You'll have to convince me that the information you presented was heading towards the direction of truth.  The movie DVD has been advertised on Nick, hardly a hotbed for the 12 to 18 year olds.  If you've seen the displays with the cute white bears that they add with the movie, that's hardly 12 to 18 either now is it?&lt;br /&gt;
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:A more appropriate question would be what was lacking from the article as written that needed to be expanded that would still follow what was actually occurring? [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 19:38, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
:: The Golden Compass is a novel aimed at 12-18 year olds that has recently been adapted into a film.    Perhaps we could compromise on creating a separate subheading discussing the film version (which I agree was aimed at a much broader demographic)?&lt;br /&gt;
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::I'm not trying to be snarky, but it's my understanding that we accept genuine submissions and then improve on them, not reject them because they don't meet our standards for comprehensiveness. [[User:Underscoreb|Underscoreb]] 19:55, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::: Underscoreb asked me to offer some advice here.  It appears from the edit comments and the discussion here that the main or only issue is over the target age range, which make me wonder why all the rest was reverted as well.  Assuming the facts are correct (e.g. that it has also been published as &amp;quot;Northern Lights&amp;quot;), and ignoring the question of the target age, then I generally prefer Underscoreb's version as providing more (and useful) information.&lt;br /&gt;
::: As for the target age range, I'm not sufficiently familiar enough with the book or movie to express a preference, but do wonder if there is much point in being as specific as &amp;quot;12 to 18&amp;quot;, even if ''nominally'' that is true.  Would it be okay to say &amp;quot;younger readers&amp;quot;, or is that too vague?&lt;br /&gt;
::: Or is it really necessary to say much about the target range?  Parents reading this will be more interested in the content than the target age (i.e. they will likely already have decided whether or not the book or movie suits their children as far as age is concerned).&lt;br /&gt;
::: Despite Underscoreb's claim that &amp;quot;young adult&amp;quot; means &amp;quot;12-18 year olds&amp;quot;, I would think that most would expect the term to mean from 18 to somewhere in the 20s.  Whilst I wouldn't have thought that Wikipedia was particularly biased on this sort of thing, the referenced article does actually seem to contain a fair amount of opinion (e.g. &amp;quot;...it displayed a truer, darker side of young adult life because it was written by a young adult.&amp;quot;), and has very few references backing up the content.  So I wonder if one can accept what Wikipedia says here, but even if it is correct, I think the term is misleading, as I don't think most would understand it that way.&lt;br /&gt;
::: [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 22:44, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
::::Thanks Philip, I appreciate your objectivity. I've made the appropriate edits in what I think is a compromise. By all means feel free to make additional edits, guys, but let's act in good faith and stop with the reversions. :D [[User:Underscoreb|Underscoreb]] 17:22, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
:::::I already added in appropriate additions.  This will not be turned into a &amp;quot;he said she said&amp;quot; with some people think its just an attack against authoritarianism or comparing it to a classic like Paradise Lost.  It's not Paradise Lost.  In Paradise Found, obtained by killing God or any vestiges of Him.  We will not water this down to ignore that. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 17:39, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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I enter this discussion in response to Ub's request and after seeing this edit:&lt;br /&gt;
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:''While some interpret it as a blatant attack on Christianity, others argue that it represents a triumph over authoritarianism''&lt;br /&gt;
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First of all, I don't see why we have to maintain a stance of neutrality. We are not Wikipedia, and we're not journalists. The author said he's killing God and that ought to settle it. Moreover, even a liberal source like ''[[Newsweek]]'' wrote that &amp;quot;...no one over four feet tall could mistake the Magisterium for anything but an oppressive theocracy.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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The author is obviously portraying the Christian Church in the worst possible light. He accuses it of [[authoritarianism]], and so it makes sense for Conservatives to respond to this. &lt;br /&gt;
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Certainly most churches have a dogma and a top-down governance which cannot be altered democratically. But since people (at least in the English-speaking West) can &amp;quot;vote with their feet&amp;quot; (i.e., join another church) then the label of [[theocracy]] is misapplied. The world in which a theocratic agency kidnaps and tortures children might have described the [[Spanish Inquisition]] centuries ago, but all of Christianity denounces this as an aberration. The closest thing in modern history would be Communism and Nazism.&lt;br /&gt;
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It's ludicrous to think we have to be &amp;quot;neutral&amp;quot; on questions like:&lt;br /&gt;
#Is Pullman talking about the Judeo-Christian God?&lt;br /&gt;
#Is Pullman accusing the Christian Church of being authoritarian and/or theocratic?&lt;br /&gt;
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Let's concentrate on issues like the age range of the target audience. I haven't heard of teenagers or preteens reading the book, because it's not as fun as Harry Potter. But I'm open about that. I'm not open about whether the book is anti-religious. On that score, Pullman couldn't be more blatant. --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] &amp;lt;sup&amp;gt;[[User talk:Ed Poor|Talk]]&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt; 09:57, 8 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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== My edit ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Can someone reinstate my edit please? I can't edit the page.[[User:PashaSuez|PashaSuez]] 11:07, 8 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Honestly this is ridiculous, this is a slapdash article made of up quotes compiled by people who only seem to have second-hand knowledge of the topic.[[User:PashaSuez|PashaSuez]] 11:14, 8 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;The movie was a disappointment to atheists because it toned down the anti-religious message of the book. See [http://www.spiked-online.com/index.php?/site/article/4169/ Frank Furedi] --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] &amp;lt;sup&amp;gt;[[User talk:Ed Poor|Talk]]&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt; 16:44, 10 December 2007 (EST)&lt;br /&gt;
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:They don't have to worry.  The director made it clear that he's only doing that with the first movie to get in an young audience, then he's going to unleash the full anti-God diatribe.  I feel sorry for those parents who believe they are allowing their children to watch a regular fun kids film. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 17:47, 10 December 2007 (EST)&lt;br /&gt;
::i don't want to seem like of those liberals that always has to get a word in edgewise (even though i ''am'' one of those liberals) but isn't it up to the parents to research the things their children watch instead of letting them jump into something blindly? I'm curious as to what people think.--[[User:Incide|Incide]] 17:44, 24 January 2008 (EST)&lt;br /&gt;
:::That's absurd. On that note, I don't remember the death of any god being a major plotpoint. One of the gay angels, yes. Death of a god? Not so much. [[User:Barikada|Barikada]] 19:24, 24 January 2008 (EST)&lt;br /&gt;
::::I'm pretty sure 'God' died, Barikada. There's a whole scene about an incredibly withered, ancient angel slumped on a palanquin. It's just that in that scene, Pullman never mentions Him by name. I actually thought it was quite a clever literary technique - dethroning Him in figurative terms and all that. :D [[User:Underscoreb|Underscoreb]] 17:22, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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Pullman himself discusses his views and why he wrote the books, and it's not just to strike a blow against authoritarianism; this article will not be morphed to say as much. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 19:22, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Learntogether==&lt;br /&gt;
Please, let's not start an edit war. I understand you want to revert my edits[[http://www.conservapedia.com/index.php?title=The_Golden_Compass&amp;amp;diff=448450&amp;amp;oldid=448385]], but can we discuss them here first? Young adult fiction is generally written for readers between 12 and 18 [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Young_adult_literature]. I know we're not big on citing Wikipedia here, but it's not like literary demographics are a controversial subject...&lt;br /&gt;
As for Pullman's comments, fair enough - although he says it's an attack on any system in which control is enforced through faith. Perhaps instead of reverting it though, you could simply edit that specific section and add content. So with that in mind, do you think we could revert the reversion of the reversion? :D [[User:Underscoreb|Underscoreb]] 19:29, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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:You'll have to convince me that the information you presented was heading towards the direction of truth.  The movie DVD has been advertised on Nick, hardly a hotbed for the 12 to 18 year olds.  If you've seen the displays with the cute white bears that they add with the movie, that's hardly 12 to 18 either now is it?&lt;br /&gt;
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:A more appropriate question would be what was lacking from the article as written that needed to be expanded that would still follow what was actually occurring? [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 19:38, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
:: The Golden Compass is a novel aimed at 12-18 year olds that has recently been adapted into a film.    Perhaps we could compromise on creating a separate subheading discussing the film version (which I agree was aimed at a much broader demographic)?&lt;br /&gt;
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::I'm not trying to be snarky, but it's my understanding that we accept genuine submissions and then improve on them, not reject them because they don't meet our standards for comprehensiveness. [[User:Underscoreb|Underscoreb]] 19:55, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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::: Underscoreb asked me to offer some advice here.  It appears from the edit comments and the discussion here that the main or only issue is over the target age range, which make me wonder why all the rest was reverted as well.  Assuming the facts are correct (e.g. that it has also been published as &amp;quot;Northern Lights&amp;quot;), and ignoring the question of the target age, then I generally prefer Underscoreb's version as providing more (and useful) information.&lt;br /&gt;
::: As for the target age range, I'm not sufficiently familiar enough with the book or movie to express a preference, but do wonder if there is much point in being as specific as &amp;quot;12 to 18&amp;quot;, even if ''nominally'' that is true.  Would it be okay to say &amp;quot;younger readers&amp;quot;, or is that too vague?&lt;br /&gt;
::: Or is it really necessary to say much about the target range?  Parents reading this will be more interested in the content than the target age (i.e. they will likely already have decided whether or not the book or movie suits their children as far as age is concerned).&lt;br /&gt;
::: Despite Underscoreb's claim that &amp;quot;young adult&amp;quot; means &amp;quot;12-18 year olds&amp;quot;, I would think that most would expect the term to mean from 18 to somewhere in the 20s.  Whilst I wouldn't have thought that Wikipedia was particularly biased on this sort of thing, the referenced article does actually seem to contain a fair amount of opinion (e.g. &amp;quot;...it displayed a truer, darker side of young adult life because it was written by a young adult.&amp;quot;), and has very few references backing up the content.  So I wonder if one can accept what Wikipedia says here, but even if it is correct, I think the term is misleading, as I don't think most would understand it that way.&lt;br /&gt;
::: [[User:Philip J. Rayment|Philip J. Rayment]] 22:44, 6 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
::::Thanks Philip, I appreciate your objectivity. I've made the appropriate edits in what I think is a compromise. By all means feel free to make additional edits, guys, but let's act in good faith and stop with the reversions. :D [[User:Underscoreb|Underscoreb]] 17:22, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
:::::I already added in appropriate additions.  This will not be turned into a &amp;quot;he said she said&amp;quot; with some people think its just an attack against authoritarianism or comparing it to a classic like Paradise Lost.  It's not Paradise Lost.  In Paradise Found, obtained by killing God or any vestiges of Him.  We will not water this down to ignore that. [[User:Learn together|Learn together]] 17:39, 7 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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I enter this discussion in response to Ub's request and after seeing this edit:&lt;br /&gt;
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:''While some interpret it as a blatant attack on Christianity, others argue that it represents a triumph over authoritarianism''&lt;br /&gt;
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First of all, I don't see why we have to maintain a stance of neutrality. We are not Wikipedia, and we're not journalists. The author said he's killing God and that ought to settle it. Moreover, even a liberal source like ''[[Newsweek]]'' wrote that &amp;quot;...no one over four feet tall could mistake the Magisterium for anything but an oppressive theocracy.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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The author is obviously portraying the Christian Church in the worst possible light. He accuses it of [[authoritarianism]], and so it makes sense for Conservatives to respond to this. &lt;br /&gt;
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Certainly most churches have a dogma and a top-down governance which cannot be altered democratically. But since people (at least in the English-speaking West) can &amp;quot;vote with their feet&amp;quot; (i.e., join another church) then the label of [[theocracy]] is misapplied. The world in which a theocratic agency kidnaps and tortures children might have described the [[Spanish Inquisition]] centuries ago, but all of Christianity denounces this as an aberration. The closest thing in modern history would be Communism and Nazism.&lt;br /&gt;
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It's ludicrous to think we have to be &amp;quot;neutral&amp;quot; on questions like:&lt;br /&gt;
#Is Pullman talking about the Judeo-Christian God?&lt;br /&gt;
#Is Pullman accusing the Christian Church of being authoritarian and/or theocratic?&lt;br /&gt;
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Let's concentrate on issues like the age range of the target audience. I haven't heard of teenagers or preteens reading the book, because it's not as fun as Harry Potter. But I'm open about that. I'm not open about whether the book is anti-religious. On that score, Pullman couldn't be more blatant. --[[User:Ed Poor|Ed Poor]] &amp;lt;sup&amp;gt;[[User talk:Ed Poor|Talk]]&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt; 09:57, 8 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;br /&gt;
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== My edit ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Can someone reinstate my edit please? I can't edit the page.[[User:PashaSuez|PashaSuez]] 11:07, 8 May 2008 (EDT)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;[[Image:OxygenNovel.jpeg|thumb|200px|right|Cover art by Lookout Design Group]]&lt;br /&gt;
'''''Oxygen''''' is a [[science fiction|futuristic]] [[Christian]] [[novel]].&lt;br /&gt;
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== Description ==&lt;br /&gt;
* By [[John B. Olson]] and [[Randall S. Ingermanson]]&lt;br /&gt;
* Grand Rapids, [[Michigan]]: [[Bethany House]], 2001.&lt;br /&gt;
* ISBN 0764224425&lt;br /&gt;
* 365 pages, paperback&lt;br /&gt;
* Cover illustration by Lookout Design Group, Inc.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Plot introduction==&lt;br /&gt;
The first crewed ship to fly to [[Mars]] suffers damage from an in-space explosion, which severely limits the crew's oxygen supply. This force them to make some hard, lifeboat-like choices to stay alive.&lt;br /&gt;
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===Explanation of the novel's title===&lt;br /&gt;
[[Oxygen]] is a vital element for life--and one that the accident to the characters places in perilously short supply.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Plot summary==&lt;br /&gt;
{{spoiler}}&lt;br /&gt;
===Beginning===&lt;br /&gt;
As the novel begins, Dr. Valerie (&amp;quot;Valkerie&amp;quot;) Jansen is on a field trip on the slope of [[Mount Trident]] on the [[Alaska Peninsula]]. In real life, this volcano has not erupted for many years--but in the novel, Mount Trident vents sulfur dioxide into the air, and this gas settles into the valley where Valkerie is encamped. She barely survives the experience, at one point taking the air from the tires of her Jeep, which is the only air available for her to breathe.&lt;br /&gt;
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The next morning, the Chief Administrator of [[NASA]], together with one of NASA's senior physicians, lands on the slope of Mount Trident in a helicopter. They are looking for Valkerie, because they wish to interview her for a position as an [[Astronaut]] Candidate. The conversation that follows is very confusing to both sides, chiefly because Valkerie is convinced that Mount Trident is about to erupt and all three must evacuate at once. Eventually, however, Valkerie climbs aboard the helicopter with the two NASA officials.&lt;br /&gt;
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Eventually she is summoned to Houston, Texas, and reports for training at NASA's headquarters complex. A hot dispute between the NASA Administrator and Nate Harrington, the Mars Mission Director, results in her beginning a training regimen that is more grueling than usual, leading her to believe that Harrington wants her dropped from the program on any pretext he can invent. But in fact the NASA brass are very much impressed with her academic record and her seemingly unique ability to cope with &amp;quot;five-sigma&amp;quot; days&amp;amp;mdash;days remarkable for a series of dire, often life-threatening crises. (Her breathing the air in her Jeep tires to survive the fumarolic venting incident is a case in point.) As for Mr. Harrington, he has never wanted anything more than to have the NASA administrator respect his prerogatives as Mars Mission Director&amp;amp;mdash;and furthermore, he is distracted by a series of events that have nothing to do with Valkerie or her candidacy.&lt;br /&gt;
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Nate's distractions include: a serious budget problem that has forced NASA to sell exclusive broadcast rights to a major television network, a clear threat from a prominent [[United States Senate|US Senator]] that he &amp;quot;has the votes&amp;quot; to terminate NASA's flagship program, a compromise of project security that darkly suggests a terrorist plot against NASA (and requires him to have an FBI agent as a semi-regular on the NASA campus)--and a controversy involving the crew selection for Ares 10, which is to be the first crewed mission to Mars. NASA's psychiatrists have abruptly demanded interviews with all members of the Ares 10 crew&amp;amp;mdash;Josh Bennett, Kennedy Hampton, Alexis &amp;quot;Lex&amp;quot; Ohta, and Bob &amp;quot;Kaggo&amp;quot; Kaganovski. Bob in particular fears that the psychiatrists want to remove him from the crew&amp;amp;mdash;because he has never felt entirely secure in his position, mainly because he does not have the devil-may-care abandon that is part of the &amp;quot;astronaut stereotype&amp;quot; and which Kennedy displays in overabundance. So when the psychiatrists call him in for an interview, he tells them that he would gladly obey any order given him by Josh, the assigned mission commander&amp;amp;mdash;not mentioning that he always reserves the right to act as he sees fit if he thinks that Josh, or any other commander, has issued a wrong order.&lt;br /&gt;
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But the psychiatrists are not suspicious of Bob at all, but rather of Josh. Specifically, their protocols inform them that having one man, even the mission commander, dominate the crew is a recipe for disaster. Bob's interview, added to an earlier interview given by Kennedy, only add to their disquiet. During their deliberations, they then run a computer-based decision-analytic model on two possible crew complements&amp;amp;mdash;one including Josh, and the other removing Josh as mission commander and assigning Valkerie Jansen to the flight. To everyone's surprise, a crew complement that includes Valkerie scores very high on their decision-analytic indices.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thus the psychiatrists issue their final &amp;quot;recommendation,&amp;quot; which carries the force of an order: Josh Bennett is to be dropped from the crew, Kennedy Hampton is to be promoted to mission commander, and the crew will gain a new mission specialist: Valkerie Jansen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Valkerie feels doubly guilty about accepting the assignment. First, she sees herself as usurping the place of another, more experienced astronaut (Josh). Second, she is afraid that a prior association will return to haunt her&amp;amp;mdash;specifically, her relationship with a fellow student at [[Yale University]] who killed himself in a laboratory explosion he had caused because of his notion of [[Christian]] duty. (This bombing incident took place during the heyday of [[Operation Rescue]]&amp;amp;mdash;and furthermore, the presence of a religious-motivated picket line at NASA's main gate only adds to her apprehensions about having her Christian associations revealed.)&lt;br /&gt;
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Josh is ignorant of her fears concerning her Christian associations, but recognizes that she might feel guilty over supplanting him. So he takes her on a training flight to the [[Kennedy Space Center]] and there tells her that her primary duty is to Project Ares, which will shut down completely if she does not accept the assignment. He gallantly offers to take personal responsibility for her remaining training. With this assurance, she returns to Houston and tells Nate Harrington that she will accept the assignment.&lt;br /&gt;
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===Launch&amp;amp;mdash;and Disaster===&lt;br /&gt;
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In January of 2014, Ares 10 launches into space. The launch is very violent, because the mission controllers decide to launch in the face of a crosswind that exceeds NASA's stated limits. This causes damage to multiple habitat systems, including the telemetry bus, the Ku-band antenna, and a solar panel. Valkerie develops serious doubts about continuing the mission, especially when she catches Kennedy in a lie about a chemical fluid spill (he says that he spilled juice from a snack container, but Valkerie knows better) and then appears to threaten her with the non-regulation acetylene blowtorch he has brought aboard. Bob is actually no more eager to continue than Valkerie. But Kennedy insists on continuing the mission and browbeats his crew into telling Houston that they are all agreed. Subsequently, they perform trans-Martian injection, thus committing themselves.&lt;br /&gt;
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Three months later, they have (finally!) repaired their data telemetry bus, and Kennedy and Bob perform an EVA to repair the Ku-band antenna, a repair that would have been pointless before. After completing the repair, they proceed to inspect the dual solar panels to see whether they can repair the damaged panel. Bob discovers some stray exposed wires that do not appear on anyone's schematics of the habitat. He proceeds to test them with a [[Multimeter|multimeter]]&amp;amp;mdash;and by a fateful error, sets the multimeter to measure resistance rather than electromotive potential (&amp;quot;voltage&amp;quot;). As a result, he inadvertently bridges a circuit between the wires&amp;amp;mdash;and thus causes an explosion. Someone has, quite simply, planted a bomb on board, and Bob has triggered it.&lt;br /&gt;
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The explosion blows away the otherwise intact solar panel, compromises the hull, and dazes Bob and fills his arm with what turns out to be stainless-steel shrapnel&amp;amp;mdash;a detail whose full significance the astronauts will realize only much later. Valkerie, standing by in the EVA suit room, immediately (a) suits up, (b) places the unconscious Lex Ohta into a rescue bubble, (c) hastily repairs the hull breach, and (d) releases the remaining oxygen from the fuel-cell tanks. Only then can she open the airlock to admit Kennedy, who at first insists that Bob is dead. Valkerie, believing that Kennedy acted carelessly, goes outside to fetch him in.&lt;br /&gt;
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Presently Bob recovers enough to discover that Valkerie's repair was incomplete, and simply asks her to help him make a more complete repair. But as a result of the original hull breach and Valkerie's incomplete repair efforts, the crew no longer has enough oxygen on board to survive the transit to Mars. Neither will they have sufficient power for all ship's systems from the remaining solar panel when they reach Mars. When NASA (represented by a very shaken Josh Bennett as CapCom) fails to inform them of this fact in a timely fashion, the astronauts bleakly conclude that they can no longer trust NASA.&lt;br /&gt;
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===A life-or-death choice===&lt;br /&gt;
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Josh Bennett refuses to give up on the crew. He remembers that an [[Earth Return Vehicle]] is on its way to Mars at the same time, and proposes to accelerate it to intercept Ares 10, so that the crew can use it as a lifeboat. Engineer Cathe Willison computes a solution for the intercept&amp;amp;mdash;but then points out that the oxygen will only last if two of the crew sacrifice themselves. Valkerie, however, proposes another solution: observing that Lex, who is still in a coma, is consuming less oxygen, she proposes that two other astronauts go into drug-induced comas, with one astronaut remaining awake to accomplish the rendezvous and then reawaken the rest of the crew. NASA's doctors conclude that Valkerie could in fact synthesize enough [[sodium pentathol]] to accomplish this plan. But this begs the question of which astronaut will remain awake.&lt;br /&gt;
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That question is more than academic&amp;amp;mdash;because a review of surveillance tapes made inside the habitat prior to launch identifies six people only who could have planted the bomb. They are the four members of the crew, Josh Bennett, and Nate Harrington. No one suspects Nate or Josh (not yet), and so the astronauts suspect one another. Furthermore, Kennedy is deliberately manipulating his crewmates' emotions, even to the point of crudely demanding sexual favors from Valkerie (which she refuses to grant).&lt;br /&gt;
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Two further items of evidence eventually decide the issue in Valkerie's favor. One, Josh Bennett discovers that Kennedy in fact manipulated NASA's psychiatric brass in order to have Josh removed from the crew. Two, a computer simulation predicts that if Bob is the one to stay awake, he'll only use up all the oxygen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Bob, ever reserving his right to act at discretion, secretly prepares a dose of sodium pentathol to use on Valkerie after she has sedated Kennedy. But at the last minute, Valkerie tells him that she forgives him for not trusting her. He cannot bring himself to rebel against Valkerie, and so allows her to sedate him.&lt;br /&gt;
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===Another disaster&amp;amp;mdash;and eventual landing===&lt;br /&gt;
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Valkerie now faces a problem with which she almost cannot cope: total isolation, with no one to converse with&amp;amp;mdash;not even Houston, because she must power down the radio to conserve energy. She spends most of the time in prayer, but mostly crying out to God to &amp;quot;send her an e-mail&amp;quot; and give her a reason to believe.&lt;br /&gt;
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As the ERV continues its approach, Valkerie asks for and receives permission to revive Bob so that he can help her pilot the habitat to a rendezvous with the ERV. Unhappily, the ERV is approaching far too fast. Valkerie's attempt to match velocity with it ends in failure, and worse&amp;amp;mdash;she uses up more fuel than they can spare.&lt;br /&gt;
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With the ERV speeding past the habitat, Bob and Valkerie suddenly remember that the ERV carries a crew re-entry vehicle with its own engine. They issue orders to detach it from the ERV and bring it to a slow rendezvous. Valkerie makes another spacewalk to cut loose its oxygen tank and bring it aboard. Bob, in turn, receives instructions to build a Sabatier scrubber&amp;amp;mdash;an ultra-low-power device for removing carbon dioxide from the ship's air.&lt;br /&gt;
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They then reawaken Kennedy, who must regain his strength to perform the landing&amp;amp;mdash;and then decide that the only way they can land is to abandon the original mission profile calling for a Martian orbital capture, and instead dive straight down to the Martian surface. This is an incredibly risky maneuver, one which they almost do not complete because they are about to use an aerobrake deployment system that is non-functional. (Another failure of trust is responsible for this predicament, which they avoid only by some last-minute deduction of NASA's true intentions.) They intend to land in a camp that previous missions have already established&amp;amp;mdash;but they end up landing too far away. However, they manage to pool their remaining oxygen to give to Bob and Kennedy, so that they can retrieve a pressurized powered rover to rescue Valkerie and Lex. When the men return, they find the women unconscious and seemingly dead. But they are not dead, because Valkerie has found Bob's hidden dose of sodium pentathol and uses that to put her and Lex into a coma once again. They survive, but Valkerie suffers multiple rib fractures when Bob attempts [[cardiopulmonary resuscitation]].&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally, the astronauts realize the significance of the stainless-steel shrapnel with which Bob had been wounded in the initial explosion. None of the ship's systems was made of stainless steel--in fact, the lack of any material but plastic was a source of great frustration to Valkerie when she first attempted to seal the hull breach. Valkerie and Lex realize that the stainless steel must have come from a bacterial culture vial that Josh Bennett had received from a former girlfriend in [[Antarctica]]&amp;amp;mdash;and that the vial contained a radiation-resistant bacterium, the same one that in fact had contaminated some of the ship's systems after the explosion. Now the astronauts realize what has happened to them: Josh Bennett, fearing cancellation of Project Ares and the disbanding of NASA, sought to &amp;quot;seed&amp;quot; a radio-resistant bacterium on Mars for the astronauts to &amp;quot;discover.&amp;quot; To accomplish this, he did plant a bomb on board, designed to detonate with the deployment of the aerobrakes. But the damage to the habitat on the rocky launch ultimately caused the bomb to detonate in transit. This also explains Josh's brittle emotional state: he realizes that his attempt to give the astronauts something to discover very nearly killed them instead. Bob ultimately tells Josh that Valkerie has figured it out, and that they all forgive him for what he did, knowing as they do that he never meant them any harm.&lt;br /&gt;
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The last scene is a set-up for the sequel: Bob, who is now enamored of Valkerie, proposes marriage to her before a world-wide six-billion-strong television audience that has tuned into watch &amp;quot;the first two astronauts to walk on Mars.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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{{endspoiler}}&lt;br /&gt;
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==Characters in ''Oxygen'' ==&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Astronaut]] Joshua &amp;quot;Josh&amp;quot; Bennett, original Mission Commander, afterwards CapCom.&lt;br /&gt;
*Astronaut Kennedy &amp;quot;The Hampster&amp;quot; Hampton, original Pilot Officer, afterwards Mission Commander.&lt;br /&gt;
*Astronaut Alexis &amp;quot;Lex&amp;quot; Ohta, original Mission Specialist (Geology), afterwards Pilot Officer.&lt;br /&gt;
*Astronaut Robert &amp;quot;Kaggo&amp;quot; Kaganovski, Mission Specialist (Engineering)&lt;br /&gt;
*Astronaut Candidate Valerie &amp;quot;Valkerie&amp;quot; Jansen, eventual Mission Specialist (Life Sciences and Crew Medicine)&lt;br /&gt;
*Nathan &amp;quot;Nate&amp;quot; Harrington, Mars Mission Director&lt;br /&gt;
*Steven Perez, Chief Administrator, [[NASA]]&lt;br /&gt;
*Robert Abrams, MD, senior psychiatrist, [[NASA]]&lt;br /&gt;
*Special Agent Crystal Yamaguchi, [[FBI]]&lt;br /&gt;
*Cathe Willison, engineer&lt;br /&gt;
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==Major themes==&lt;br /&gt;
Space exploration, the importance of friendship, the power of prayer and faith, the Providential nature of God, and how sometimes humans fail to hear the voice of God because &amp;quot;He won't send an e-mail.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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==Allusions/references to other works==&lt;br /&gt;
'''''Oxygen''''' contains scattered allusions to ''[[Star Trek]]'', and more specifically to which characters in that 1960's television series are most analogous to various positions on a Mars crew.&lt;br /&gt;
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'''''Oxygen''''' also contains an allusion to ''[[The Right Stuff]]'', by describing Astronaut Kennedy Hampton as being an astronaut in the &amp;quot;fighter jock&amp;quot; mold--addicted to flying as a physical sport, given to moderately heavy social drinking, sometimes given to driving while intoxicated, and accepting questionable attentions from female hangers-on, also known as [[Groupie|groupies]]. (Note: this novel is devoid of any sexual content beyond Astronaut Hampton crudely soliciting a sexual bribe from Astronaut Jansen, who indignantly refuses.)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Allusions/references to actual history, current science, and popular culture==&lt;br /&gt;
'''''Oxygen''''' makes repeated and obvious references to the near-disastrous ''[[Apollo 13]]'' mission.&lt;br /&gt;
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The [[Mars Habitat Unit|crew habitat]], the [[Earth Return Vehicle]], the Ares [[Heavy Lift Launch Vehicle]], and various other pieces of equipment are all products of the active research program of [http://www.marssociety.org/ The Mars Society] under the directorship of [[Robert Zubrin|Doctor Robert Zubrin]]. The mission profile is an adaptation of NASA's own Mars Design Reference Mission profile, which itself derives from the Mars Society's own Mars Semi-direct Mission profile.&lt;br /&gt;
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The following real-life institutions and events bear direct reference in '''''Oxygen''''': the [[United States Senate]], [[NBC]], and the [[National Football League]] (and its premier event, the [[Super Bowl]]). Specifically:&lt;br /&gt;
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* A US Senator threatens to terminate Project Ares and even NASA itself.&lt;br /&gt;
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* NASA commits with NBC to launch Ares 10 the day before the Super Bowl, on a transit timed to have it land on Mars on [[Fourth of July|Independence Day]]. This is ''not'' an optimal launch profile, and as such it is a source of tremendous frustration and consternation on the part of everyone involved, not least the crew.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Literary significance &amp;amp; criticism==&lt;br /&gt;
'''''Oxygen''''' is one of few novels to propose that astronauts might not be the unblemished heroes of the popular legend that has grown about them. This legend dates back to Projects Apollo, Gemini, and especially Mercury. Though the author [[Tom Wolfe]] (''[[The Right Stuff]]'') has definitively revealed that the Mercury astronauts were ''not'' unblemished heroes (with the possible exception of [[John Glenn]]), the notion of an astronaut deliberately manipulating his administrative superiors to influence a flight assignment, and another astronaut resorting to planting a &amp;quot;discoverable scientific find&amp;quot; in order to ensure continuance of his country's space program, might have proved difficult for readers to accept.&lt;br /&gt;
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For all its award-winning history, '''''Oxygen''''' is out-of-print today, and its author, Randy Ingermanson, has announced his intention to submit his future work to a different publisher. The jarring portrait of NASA's finest might serve as one possible explanation for the lack of continued interest in this title. However, Christian critics have consistently praised the work, perhaps ''because'' it unabashedly demonstrates that no human beings deserve placement on any sort of pedestal, and that all human beings are quite capable of making mistakes, often disastrous ones, even with the best of intentions.&lt;br /&gt;
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By far, however, the greatest significance of works like this is that they seek to bridge the gap between faith on one side, and pure and applied science on the other. '''''Oxygen''''' forthrightly addresses certain areas of science that might appear to test the Christian faith quite sorely. These include the very possibility of finding [[Extraterrestrial life|living organisms]] on a world other than [[earth]]. Regrettably, '''''Oxygen''''' does ''not'' offer any explanation that might reconcile the disparate concepts of life on worlds beyond earth, and [[God]] having [[creation|created]] life on earth and only on earth. One possible explanation might be that Mars harbors living organisms carried to it in the event that caused the [[Great Flood]]. But neither this novel nor its sequel discuss that possibility at all, possibly because the theory remains controversial even in [[creationism|creationist]] circles. Instead, they offer an assurance that the Christian faith is strong enough to stand any test, including a scientific finding that might on the surface appear to contradict Scripture. (In fact, Scripture is silent on the nature of the planets, and indeed on all celestial bodies, except the sun, moon, and stars.)&lt;br /&gt;
===Awards and nominations===&lt;br /&gt;
'''''Oxygen''''' won the 2002 [[Christy Award]] for the best futuristic Christian novel in its year of release.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Allusions/references from other works==&lt;br /&gt;
'''''Oxygen''''' is a prequel to '''''[[The Fifth Man]]''''', in which most of the above-listed characters reappear.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Film adaptations==&lt;br /&gt;
The motion-picture rights to '''''Oxygen''''' are not known to have been sold to any motion-picture producer.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Sources, references, external links, quotations==&lt;br /&gt;
[http://www.rsingermanson.com/index.html Randy Ingermanson's home page]&lt;br /&gt;
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[http://www.rsingermanson.com/html/oxygen.html Official page for '''''Oxygen''''']&lt;br /&gt;
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[http://www.marssociety.org/ The Mars Society Home]&lt;br /&gt;
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		<title>Oxygen (novel)</title>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;PashaSuez: copy from wikipedia&lt;/p&gt;
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[[Image:OxygenNovel.jpeg|thumb|200px|right|Cover art by Lookout Design Group]]&lt;br /&gt;
'''''Oxygen''''' is a [[science fiction|futuristic]] [[Christian]] [[novel]].&lt;br /&gt;
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== Description ==&lt;br /&gt;
* By [[John B. Olson]] and [[Randall S. Ingermanson]]&lt;br /&gt;
* Grand Rapids, [[Michigan]]: [[Bethany House]], 2001.&lt;br /&gt;
* ISBN 0764224425&lt;br /&gt;
* 365 pages, paperback&lt;br /&gt;
* Cover illustration by Lookout Design Group, Inc.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Plot introduction==&lt;br /&gt;
The first crewed ship to fly to [[Mars]] suffers damage from an in-space explosion, which severely limits the crew's oxygen supply. This force them to make some hard, lifeboat-like choices to stay alive.&lt;br /&gt;
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===Explanation of the novel's title===&lt;br /&gt;
[[Oxygen]] is a vital element for life--and one that the accident to the characters places in perilously short supply.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Plot summary==&lt;br /&gt;
{{spoiler}}&lt;br /&gt;
===Beginning===&lt;br /&gt;
As the novel begins, Dr. Valerie (&amp;quot;Valkerie&amp;quot;) Jansen is on a field trip on the slope of [[Mount Trident]] on the [[Alaska Peninsula]]. In real life, this volcano has not erupted for many years--but in the novel, Mount Trident vents sulfur dioxide into the air, and this gas settles into the valley where Valkerie is encamped. She barely survives the experience, at one point taking the air from the tires of her Jeep, which is the only air available for her to breathe.&lt;br /&gt;
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The next morning, the Chief Administrator of [[NASA]], together with one of NASA's senior physicians, lands on the slope of Mount Trident in a helicopter. They are looking for Valkerie, because they wish to interview her for a position as an [[Astronaut]] Candidate. The conversation that follows is very confusing to both sides, chiefly because Valkerie is convinced that Mount Trident is about to erupt and all three must evacuate at once. Eventually, however, Valkerie climbs aboard the helicopter with the two NASA officials.&lt;br /&gt;
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Eventually she is summoned to Houston, Texas, and reports for training at NASA's headquarters complex. A hot dispute between the NASA Administrator and Nate Harrington, the Mars Mission Director, results in her beginning a training regimen that is more grueling than usual, leading her to believe that Harrington wants her dropped from the program on any pretext he can invent. But in fact the NASA brass are very much impressed with her academic record and her seemingly unique ability to cope with &amp;quot;five-sigma&amp;quot; days&amp;amp;mdash;days remarkable for a series of dire, often life-threatening crises. (Her breathing the air in her Jeep tires to survive the fumarolic venting incident is a case in point.) As for Mr. Harrington, he has never wanted anything more than to have the NASA administrator respect his prerogatives as Mars Mission Director&amp;amp;mdash;and furthermore, he is distracted by a series of events that have nothing to do with Valkerie or her candidacy.&lt;br /&gt;
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Nate's distractions include: a serious budget problem that has forced NASA to sell exclusive broadcast rights to a major television network, a clear threat from a prominent [[United States Senate|US Senator]] that he &amp;quot;has the votes&amp;quot; to terminate NASA's flagship program, a compromise of project security that darkly suggests a terrorist plot against NASA (and requires him to have an FBI agent as a semi-regular on the NASA campus)--and a controversy involving the crew selection for Ares 10, which is to be the first crewed mission to Mars. NASA's psychiatrists have abruptly demanded interviews with all members of the Ares 10 crew&amp;amp;mdash;Josh Bennett, Kennedy Hampton, Alexis &amp;quot;Lex&amp;quot; Ohta, and Bob &amp;quot;Kaggo&amp;quot; Kaganovski. Bob in particular fears that the psychiatrists want to remove him from the crew&amp;amp;mdash;because he has never felt entirely secure in his position, mainly because he does not have the devil-may-care abandon that is part of the &amp;quot;astronaut stereotype&amp;quot; and which Kennedy displays in overabundance. So when the psychiatrists call him in for an interview, he tells them that he would gladly obey any order given him by Josh, the assigned mission commander&amp;amp;mdash;not mentioning that he always reserves the right to act as he sees fit if he thinks that Josh, or any other commander, has issued a wrong order.&lt;br /&gt;
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But the psychiatrists are not suspicious of Bob at all, but rather of Josh. Specifically, their protocols inform them that having one man, even the mission commander, dominate the crew is a recipe for disaster. Bob's interview, added to an earlier interview given by Kennedy, only add to their disquiet. During their deliberations, they then run a computer-based decision-analytic model on two possible crew complements&amp;amp;mdash;one including Josh, and the other removing Josh as mission commander and assigning Valkerie Jansen to the flight. To everyone's surprise, a crew complement that includes Valkerie scores very high on their decision-analytic indices.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thus the psychiatrists issue their final &amp;quot;recommendation,&amp;quot; which carries the force of an order: Josh Bennett is to be dropped from the crew, Kennedy Hampton is to be promoted to mission commander, and the crew will gain a new mission specialist: Valkerie Jansen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Valkerie feels doubly guilty about accepting the assignment. First, she sees herself as usurping the place of another, more experienced astronaut (Josh). Second, she is afraid that a prior association will return to haunt her&amp;amp;mdash;specifically, her relationship with a fellow student at [[Yale University]] who killed himself in a laboratory explosion he had caused because of his notion of [[Christian]] duty. (This bombing incident took place during the heyday of [[Operation Rescue]]&amp;amp;mdash;and furthermore, the presence of a religious-motivated picket line at NASA's main gate only adds to her apprehensions about having her Christian associations revealed.)&lt;br /&gt;
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Josh is ignorant of her fears concerning her Christian associations, but recognizes that she might feel guilty over supplanting him. So he takes her on a training flight to the [[Kennedy Space Center]] and there tells her that her primary duty is to Project Ares, which will shut down completely if she does not accept the assignment. He gallantly offers to take personal responsibility for her remaining training. With this assurance, she returns to Houston and tells Nate Harrington that she will accept the assignment.&lt;br /&gt;
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===Launch&amp;amp;mdash;and Disaster===&lt;br /&gt;
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In January of 2014, Ares 10 launches into space. The launch is very violent, because the mission controllers decide to launch in the face of a crosswind that exceeds NASA's stated limits. This causes damage to multiple habitat systems, including the telemetry bus, the Ku-band antenna, and a solar panel. Valkerie develops serious doubts about continuing the mission, especially when she catches Kennedy in a lie about a chemical fluid spill (he says that he spilled juice from a snack container, but Valkerie knows better) and then appears to threaten her with the non-regulation acetylene blowtorch he has brought aboard. Bob is actually no more eager to continue than Valkerie. But Kennedy insists on continuing the mission and browbeats his crew into telling Houston that they are all agreed. Subsequently, they perform trans-Martian injection, thus committing themselves.&lt;br /&gt;
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Three months later, they have (finally!) repaired their data telemetry bus, and Kennedy and Bob perform an EVA to repair the Ku-band antenna, a repair that would have been pointless before. After completing the repair, they proceed to inspect the dual solar panels to see whether they can repair the damaged panel. Bob discovers some stray exposed wires that do not appear on anyone's schematics of the habitat. He proceeds to test them with a [[Multimeter|multimeter]]&amp;amp;mdash;and by a fateful error, sets the multimeter to measure resistance rather than electromotive potential (&amp;quot;voltage&amp;quot;). As a result, he inadvertently bridges a circuit between the wires&amp;amp;mdash;and thus causes an explosion. Someone has, quite simply, planted a bomb on board, and Bob has triggered it.&lt;br /&gt;
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The explosion blows away the otherwise intact solar panel, compromises the hull, and dazes Bob and fills his arm with what turns out to be stainless-steel shrapnel&amp;amp;mdash;a detail whose full significance the astronauts will realize only much later. Valkerie, standing by in the EVA suit room, immediately (a) suits up, (b) places the unconscious Lex Ohta into a rescue bubble, (c) hastily repairs the hull breach, and (d) releases the remaining oxygen from the fuel-cell tanks. Only then can she open the airlock to admit Kennedy, who at first insists that Bob is dead. Valkerie, believing that Kennedy acted carelessly, goes outside to fetch him in.&lt;br /&gt;
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Presently Bob recovers enough to discover that Valkerie's repair was incomplete, and simply asks her to help him make a more complete repair. But as a result of the original hull breach and Valkerie's incomplete repair efforts, the crew no longer has enough oxygen on board to survive the transit to Mars. Neither will they have sufficient power for all ship's systems from the remaining solar panel when they reach Mars. When NASA (represented by a very shaken Josh Bennett as CapCom) fails to inform them of this fact in a timely fashion, the astronauts bleakly conclude that they can no longer trust NASA.&lt;br /&gt;
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===A life-or-death choice===&lt;br /&gt;
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Josh Bennett refuses to give up on the crew. He remembers that an [[Earth Return Vehicle]] is on its way to Mars at the same time, and proposes to accelerate it to intercept Ares 10, so that the crew can use it as a lifeboat. Engineer Cathe Willison computes a solution for the intercept&amp;amp;mdash;but then points out that the oxygen will only last if two of the crew sacrifice themselves. Valkerie, however, proposes another solution: observing that Lex, who is still in a coma, is consuming less oxygen, she proposes that two other astronauts go into drug-induced comas, with one astronaut remaining awake to accomplish the rendezvous and then reawaken the rest of the crew. NASA's doctors conclude that Valkerie could in fact synthesize enough [[sodium pentathol]] to accomplish this plan. But this begs the question of which astronaut will remain awake.&lt;br /&gt;
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That question is more than academic&amp;amp;mdash;because a review of surveillance tapes made inside the habitat prior to launch identifies six people only who could have planted the bomb. They are the four members of the crew, Josh Bennett, and Nate Harrington. No one suspects Nate or Josh (not yet), and so the astronauts suspect one another. Furthermore, Kennedy is deliberately manipulating his crewmates' emotions, even to the point of crudely demanding sexual favors from Valkerie (which she refuses to grant).&lt;br /&gt;
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Two further items of evidence eventually decide the issue in Valkerie's favor. One, Josh Bennett discovers that Kennedy in fact manipulated NASA's psychiatric brass in order to have Josh removed from the crew. Two, a computer simulation predicts that if Bob is the one to stay awake, he'll only use up all the oxygen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Bob, ever reserving his right to act at discretion, secretly prepares a dose of sodium pentathol to use on Valkerie after she has sedated Kennedy. But at the last minute, Valkerie tells him that she forgives him for not trusting her. He cannot bring himself to rebel against Valkerie, and so allows her to sedate him.&lt;br /&gt;
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===Another disaster&amp;amp;mdash;and eventual landing===&lt;br /&gt;
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Valkerie now faces a problem with which she almost cannot cope: total isolation, with no one to converse with&amp;amp;mdash;not even Houston, because she must power down the radio to conserve energy. She spends most of the time in prayer, but mostly crying out to God to &amp;quot;send her an e-mail&amp;quot; and give her a reason to believe.&lt;br /&gt;
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As the ERV continues its approach, Valkerie asks for and receives permission to revive Bob so that he can help her pilot the habitat to a rendezvous with the ERV. Unhappily, the ERV is approaching far too fast. Valkerie's attempt to match velocity with it ends in failure, and worse&amp;amp;mdash;she uses up more fuel than they can spare.&lt;br /&gt;
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With the ERV speeding past the habitat, Bob and Valkerie suddenly remember that the ERV carries a crew re-entry vehicle with its own engine. They issue orders to detach it from the ERV and bring it to a slow rendezvous. Valkerie makes another spacewalk to cut loose its oxygen tank and bring it aboard. Bob, in turn, receives instructions to build a Sabatier scrubber&amp;amp;mdash;an ultra-low-power device for removing carbon dioxide from the ship's air.&lt;br /&gt;
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They then reawaken Kennedy, who must regain his strength to perform the landing&amp;amp;mdash;and then decide that the only way they can land is to abandon the original mission profile calling for a Martian orbital capture, and instead dive straight down to the Martian surface. This is an incredibly risky maneuver, one which they almost do not complete because they are about to use an aerobrake deployment system that is non-functional. (Another failure of trust is responsible for this predicament, which they avoid only by some last-minute deduction of NASA's true intentions.) They intend to land in a camp that previous missions have already established&amp;amp;mdash;but they end up landing too far away. However, they manage to pool their remaining oxygen to give to Bob and Kennedy, so that they can retrieve a pressurized powered rover to rescue Valkerie and Lex. When the men return, they find the women unconscious and seemingly dead. But they are not dead, because Valkerie has found Bob's hidden dose of sodium pentathol and uses that to put her and Lex into a coma once again. They survive, but Valkerie suffers multiple rib fractures when Bob attempts [[cardiopulmonary resuscitation]].&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally, the astronauts realize the significance of the stainless-steel shrapnel with which Bob had been wounded in the initial explosion. None of the ship's systems was made of stainless steel--in fact, the lack of any material but plastic was a source of great frustration to Valkerie when she first attempted to seal the hull breach. Valkerie and Lex realize that the stainless steel must have come from a bacterial culture vial that Josh Bennett had received from a former girlfriend in [[Antarctica]]&amp;amp;mdash;and that the vial contained a radiation-resistant bacterium, the same one that in fact had contaminated some of the ship's systems after the explosion. Now the astronauts realize what has happened to them: Josh Bennett, fearing cancellation of Project Ares and the disbanding of NASA, sought to &amp;quot;seed&amp;quot; a radio-resistant bacterium on Mars for the astronauts to &amp;quot;discover.&amp;quot; To accomplish this, he did plant a bomb on board, designed to detonate with the deployment of the aerobrakes. But the damage to the habitat on the rocky launch ultimately caused the bomb to detonate in transit. This also explains Josh's brittle emotional state: he realizes that his attempt to give the astronauts something to discover very nearly killed them instead. Bob ultimately tells Josh that Valkerie has figured it out, and that they all forgive him for what he did, knowing as they do that he never meant them any harm.&lt;br /&gt;
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The last scene is a set-up for the sequel: Bob, who is now enamored of Valkerie, proposes marriage to her before a world-wide six-billion-strong television audience that has tuned into watch &amp;quot;the first two astronauts to walk on Mars.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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==Characters in ''Oxygen'' ==&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Astronaut]] Joshua &amp;quot;Josh&amp;quot; Bennett, original Mission Commander, afterwards CapCom.&lt;br /&gt;
*Astronaut Kennedy &amp;quot;The Hampster&amp;quot; Hampton, original Pilot Officer, afterwards Mission Commander.&lt;br /&gt;
*Astronaut Alexis &amp;quot;Lex&amp;quot; Ohta, original Mission Specialist (Geology), afterwards Pilot Officer.&lt;br /&gt;
*Astronaut Robert &amp;quot;Kaggo&amp;quot; Kaganovski, Mission Specialist (Engineering)&lt;br /&gt;
*Astronaut Candidate Valerie &amp;quot;Valkerie&amp;quot; Jansen, eventual Mission Specialist (Life Sciences and Crew Medicine)&lt;br /&gt;
*Nathan &amp;quot;Nate&amp;quot; Harrington, Mars Mission Director&lt;br /&gt;
*Steven Perez, Chief Administrator, [[NASA]]&lt;br /&gt;
*Robert Abrams, MD, senior psychiatrist, [[NASA]]&lt;br /&gt;
*Special Agent Crystal Yamaguchi, [[FBI]]&lt;br /&gt;
*Cathe Willison, engineer&lt;br /&gt;
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==Major themes==&lt;br /&gt;
Space exploration, the importance of friendship, the power of prayer and faith, the Providential nature of God, and how sometimes humans fail to hear the voice of God because &amp;quot;He won't send an e-mail.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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==Allusions/references to other works==&lt;br /&gt;
'''''Oxygen''''' contains scattered allusions to ''[[Star Trek]]'', and more specifically to which characters in that 1960's television series are most analogous to various positions on a Mars crew.&lt;br /&gt;
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'''''Oxygen''''' also contains an allusion to ''[[The Right Stuff]]'', by describing Astronaut Kennedy Hampton as being an astronaut in the &amp;quot;fighter jock&amp;quot; mold--addicted to flying as a physical sport, given to moderately heavy social drinking, sometimes given to driving while intoxicated, and accepting questionable attentions from female hangers-on, also known as [[Groupie|groupies]]. (Note: this novel is devoid of any sexual content beyond Astronaut Hampton crudely soliciting a sexual bribe from Astronaut Jansen, who indignantly refuses.)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Allusions/references to actual history, current science, and popular culture==&lt;br /&gt;
'''''Oxygen''''' makes repeated and obvious references to the near-disastrous ''[[Apollo 13]]'' mission.&lt;br /&gt;
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The [[Mars Habitat Unit|crew habitat]], the [[Earth Return Vehicle]], the Ares [[Heavy Lift Launch Vehicle]], and various other pieces of equipment are all products of the active research program of [http://www.marssociety.org/ The Mars Society] under the directorship of [[Robert Zubrin|Doctor Robert Zubrin]]. The mission profile is an adaptation of NASA's own Mars Design Reference Mission profile, which itself derives from the Mars Society's own Mars Semi-direct Mission profile.&lt;br /&gt;
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The following real-life institutions and events bear direct reference in '''''Oxygen''''': the [[United States Senate]], [[NBC]], and the [[National Football League]] (and its premier event, the [[Super Bowl]]). Specifically:&lt;br /&gt;
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* A US Senator threatens to terminate Project Ares and even NASA itself.&lt;br /&gt;
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* NASA commits with NBC to launch Ares 10 the day before the Super Bowl, on a transit timed to have it land on Mars on [[Fourth of July|Independence Day]]. This is ''not'' an optimal launch profile, and as such it is a source of tremendous frustration and consternation on the part of everyone involved, not least the crew.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Literary significance &amp;amp; criticism==&lt;br /&gt;
'''''Oxygen''''' is one of few novels to propose that astronauts might not be the unblemished heroes of the popular legend that has grown about them. This legend dates back to Projects Apollo, Gemini, and especially Mercury. Though the author [[Tom Wolfe]] (''[[The Right Stuff]]'') has definitively revealed that the Mercury astronauts were ''not'' unblemished heroes (with the possible exception of [[John Glenn]]), the notion of an astronaut deliberately manipulating his administrative superiors to influence a flight assignment, and another astronaut resorting to planting a &amp;quot;discoverable scientific find&amp;quot; in order to ensure continuance of his country's space program, might have proved difficult for readers to accept.&lt;br /&gt;
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For all its award-winning history, '''''Oxygen''''' is out-of-print today, and its author, Randy Ingermanson, has announced his intention to submit his future work to a different publisher. The jarring portrait of NASA's finest might serve as one possible explanation for the lack of continued interest in this title. However, Christian critics have consistently praised the work, perhaps ''because'' it unabashedly demonstrates that no human beings deserve placement on any sort of pedestal, and that all human beings are quite capable of making mistakes, often disastrous ones, even with the best of intentions.&lt;br /&gt;
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By far, however, the greatest significance of works like this is that they seek to bridge the gap between faith on one side, and pure and applied science on the other. '''''Oxygen''''' forthrightly addresses certain areas of science that might appear to test the Christian faith quite sorely. These include the very possibility of finding [[Extraterrestrial life|living organisms]] on a world other than [[earth]]. Regrettably, '''''Oxygen''''' does ''not'' offer any explanation that might reconcile the disparate concepts of life on worlds beyond earth, and [[God]] having [[creation|created]] life on earth and only on earth. One possible explanation might be that Mars harbors living organisms carried to it in the event that caused the [[Great Flood]]. But neither this novel nor its sequel discuss that possibility at all, possibly because the theory remains controversial even in [[creationism|creationist]] circles. Instead, they offer an assurance that the Christian faith is strong enough to stand any test, including a scientific finding that might on the surface appear to contradict Scripture. (In fact, Scripture is silent on the nature of the planets, and indeed on all celestial bodies, except the sun, moon, and stars.)&lt;br /&gt;
===Awards and nominations===&lt;br /&gt;
'''''Oxygen''''' won the 2002 [[Christy Award]] for the best futuristic Christian novel in its year of release.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Allusions/references from other works==&lt;br /&gt;
'''''Oxygen''''' is a prequel to '''''[[The Fifth Man]]''''', in which most of the above-listed characters reappear.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Film adaptations==&lt;br /&gt;
The motion-picture rights to '''''Oxygen''''' are not known to have been sold to any motion-picture producer.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Sources, references, external links, quotations==&lt;br /&gt;
[http://www.rsingermanson.com/index.html Randy Ingermanson's home page]&lt;br /&gt;
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[http://www.rsingermanson.com/html/oxygen.html Official page for '''''Oxygen''''']&lt;br /&gt;
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[http://www.marssociety.org/ The Mars Society Home]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category:Novels]]&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<title>The Golden Compass</title>
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&lt;div&gt;'''''The Golden Compass''''' is the first novel in [[Philip Pullman]]'s ''[[His Dark Materials]]'' fantasy trilogy. It is aimed at young adults, but is popular in many age groups. The book has several major themes, including the loss of innocence and fall from grace, the human soul, and the battle of heaven versus hell as portrayed in [[John Milton]]'s ''[[Paradise Lost]]'', from which Pullman drew heavy inspiration. However, Pullman reverses Milton's outcome and implies that heaven loses the battle to the two main characters, Lyra and Will (introduced in ''[[The Subtle Knife]]'').&lt;br /&gt;
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Church historian Dr. [[Quinn Fox]] wrote:&lt;br /&gt;
{{quotebox|Pullman's simplistically harsh view of the church and [[God]] posit a power-hungry, misanthropic institution out of control, and a detached, domineering God devoid of [[grace]].&amp;quot; [http://www.pluggedinonline.com/movies/movies/a0003536.cfm] }}&lt;br /&gt;
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It is the first in a trilogy of novels by Pullman and was recently released in a film adaptation starring [[Nicole Kidman]] and [[Daniel Craig]] it was being advertised during Christmas specials on Lifetime.  Plot summary (from [http://www.amazon.com Amazon.com]): &lt;br /&gt;
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*In the epic trilogy [[His Dark Materials]], Philip Pullman unlocks the door to worlds parallel to our own. Dæmons and winged creatures live side by side with humans, and a mysterious entity called Dust just might have the power to unite the universes--if it isn't destroyed first. The three books in Pullman's heroic fantasy series, published as mass-market paperbacks with new covers, are united here in one boxed set that includes The Golden Compass, The Subtle Knife, and The Amber Spyglass. Join Lyra, Pantalaimon, Will, and the rest as they embark on the most breathtaking, heartbreaking adventure of their lives. The fate of the universe is in their hands. (Ages 13 and older)&lt;br /&gt;
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''The Golden Compass'' was originally published in [[Britain]] under the title ''Northern Lights''. It was retitled for a North American readership.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Criticism ==&lt;br /&gt;
Allegations of an atheist agenda present both in Pullman's writing as well as the film adaptation have been raised by numerous conservative groups.  Reporting on the issue has ranged from mainstream news outlets like [[Fox News]] and [[CNN]] to left-leaning blogs like [http://2log.audienceoftwo.com/?blog_id=141 2log].  While Pullman has watered down his rhetoric before the release of his movie, his interviews over the years have not been as guarded. &amp;lt;blockquote&amp;gt; &amp;quot;&amp;quot;I'm a great fan of J.K. Rowling, but the people - mainly from America's Bible Belt - who complain that Harry Potter promotes Satanism or witchcraft obviously haven't got enough in their lives. Meanwhile, I've been flying under the radar, saying things that are far more subversive than anything poor old Harry has said. My books are about killing God.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;ref&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
http://nymag.com/daily/entertainment/2007/11/philip_pullman_realizes_underm.html&amp;lt;/ref&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/blockquote&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Brian Rittmeyer of the ''Pittsburgh Tribune-Review'' wrote:&lt;br /&gt;
*St. Alphonsus Catholic Church in Pine describes the movie as &amp;quot;atheism for kids,&amp;quot; and Pullman as a &amp;quot;militant atheist and secular humanist&amp;quot; whose objective is to bash Christianity and &amp;quot;kill God in the minds of children.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
*&amp;quot;While 'The Golden Compass' movie itself may seem mild and innocent, the books are a much different story,&amp;quot; the church bulletin says. &amp;quot;Each book in the trilogy gets progressively worse regarding Pullman's hatred of Jesus Christ.&amp;quot; &amp;lt;ref&amp;gt;http://www.pittsburghlive.com/x/pittsburghtrib/news/cityregion/s_541577.html&amp;lt;/ref&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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It should be noted the books have drawn a level of support from Rowan Williams, the [[Archbishop of Canterbury]], who believes the book series by Pullman can be used to help address the &amp;quot;inadequacies&amp;quot; of some religious education courses which only teach pupils about religious festivals, and not the deeper theological issues of Christianity. &amp;lt;ref&amp;gt;http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/main.jhtml?xml=/news/2004/03/10/npull10.xml&amp;lt;/ref&amp;gt; &amp;lt;ref&amp;gt;http://www.telegraph.co.uk/arts/main.jhtml?xml=/arts/2004/03/17/bodark17.xml&amp;amp;page=1&amp;lt;/ref&amp;gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Feature film==&lt;br /&gt;
The film based on the first book of the trilogy grossed only $25,783,232 its opening weekend,&amp;lt;ref&amp;gt;http://boxofficemojo.com/movies/?id=goldencompass.htm&amp;lt;/ref&amp;gt; a disappointment when compared to earlier blockbusters that it was trying to mirror, namely the Chronicles of Narnia, Harry Potter, and Lord of the Rings.  Domestically it took in only 70 million all told, far less than the 300 million the other mentioned films each grossed. However, its foreign gross was an impressive $300 million.&amp;lt;ref&amp;gt;http://www.upi.com/NewsTrack/Entertainment/2008/01/15/compass_passes_300m_mark_at_box_office/9772/&amp;lt;/ref&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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The film originally cost 180 million to make, not counting marketing and distribution costs.&lt;br /&gt;
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